Dracula

Hi! Team Aqua here for a little review. ;) I really like the theme of words you used for your poem, the dark, tormenting words and then more peaceful phrases ...

Okay so this all sounds perfect to me and I've got no idea about how I'm going to give you any sort of criticism, so I'll just skip to the ...

Hi! Even though this is very simple and repetitive, I think it gets to the point and that's all it needs to do. At first, I was wondering what the ...

Hey! I like this story, it sounds like an old fashioned fairy tale which is awesome! I'm just wondering, is this a Frozen fanfiction? :D Okay, there's a few mistakes ...

I'm not going to say it's a 'nice' poem because this shows just how hard life is for some people. How we complain when chocolate is one day past its ...

Hello! Team Aqua here for another review! ;) First of all, I think your poem has a beautiful flow to it and could easily become a song, if you're into ...

Hello demigod buddy! *high fives* First off, a bit of advice. I see that some people are confused about some of the Percy Jackson and Greek Myth references. I suggest ...

You wrote this really well, actually. :P Seriously though. You've taken everyday school problems and made them poetic and theatrical. I think a lot of things that go on around ...

Hi! Happy Not Christmas ;) I've come to review. First I'm going to get through the little typos... They sit across each other on a two seat table It sounds ...

Well, seeing this is a Haiku, writing a review is going to be almost impossible. But I'll try. First of all, I think this is a great poem. You were ...

I have never ever seen anyone write like this before and to tell the truth, it is amazing! It makes sense backwards and forwards, which must have been quite difficult, ...

Hello! Your poem flows well and I like the whole theme, though I ended up imagining a lot of details which could have been given to me. I know readers ...

Harry Potter

Before I praise you (because it's coming) I'll just start with the little nitty picky pixies... however as we break it into the categories of Materialism, love, happiness, family. If ...

They're some lovely lyrics you've got there! :) I love the line 'my thoughts are running a marathon'. You've got great imagery and metaphors in here, but that stands out ...