Dracula

Hey there, dearestdeli! I don't normally review poetry, but I thought I'd give it a go anyway. My first thought, before I even started reading the poem, was what does ...

Hey there, Nymphealily. :) The first paragraph was pretty hectic. At first I wondered why the heck she had to defeat Voldemort and go to Narnia and I thought why ...

Hey there, it's me again! :) As Andy does my hair, she asks, "Why do you let people walk all over you?" I was waiting for this exact moment for ...

Hey there, and Happy Review Day! Oily, dark grey hair was hidden somewhere beneath his patchwork newsboy cap because revealing it was never an option. Let me firstly say that ...

Hey Eros! First of all, let me say how much I love the extra addition of IMAGES AND ILLUSTRATIONS! That's something rarely seen on Yewis and I love it when ...

Hey, Artemis. Happy last few minutes of Review Day! :) "No way am I going through that," announced Silena. "Who knows where it'll lead us? I'm not taking the risk." ...

Hey there, soulfulwriter! Happy Review Day! :D We were always civil when I would go over Alchemy's house. We would talk and laugh more than Alchemy and I ever did. ...

Hey there, Eros! A very happy Review Day to you. :) Nitpicks, nitpicks, nitpicks. I was debating whether or not to mention this but it annoyed me the whole time ...

Woah, this is a big chapter! I don't normally read such big chunks at once, but I think it's pretty cool that you're so immersed in your writing, so I'll ...

Greetings, truealpha! Happy Review Day. :D I saw that you were wondering how to delete this, and I realised that I've also forgotten how to delete works, so I went ...

Hey there, DreamingForever! Happy Review Day. :) I'm going to start right off by suggesting that you split this up into separate pieces of work. The way you've grouped eleven ...

You've done so many reviews today that it would be wrong for you not to get some of your own, so here I am. :) Wow! Your writing is really ...

Hey there! This is pretty short (and that's fine) so I'll stick to nitpicks and editing sorts of things, since there's not much else to review. First, here are some ...

Hey horseswrite, welcome to the Young Writers Society! Before I comment on anything else, I'll just mention the nitpicks I found as I read through. “No, but your are a ...

Hi, Micro! I haven't welcomed you to Yewis yet, so here's a belated welcome: WELCOME! Now that's done, I'll get onto the review. :) The way you quickly brief the ...