The Rule Of The Alien Queen...(4)

by Eros

     Chapter 4: Humans saw Aliens

Vibra visited the globe for the second time. This time Archy was also with him. This time the environment seemed cool. At a point, Vibra stopped his Drift Disk and stepped out of it. He stood in the air with narrowed lids. Archy stepped out and walked through the air towards Vibra.

"What are looking at?" Archy asked Vibra.

"There is something down there... look" Vibra told Archy pointing his index finger to a bluish-green ball of something. Archy narorwed his eyes.

"Yes, something is there." Archy agreed. Vibra flew down with jet speed. Behind him went Archy. Their Drift Disks were still up in the air floating in betweeen the clouds.

Vibra took a sample of the green ball and said, "I'll test this in my lab."

Archy looked first at the ball and then at Vibra and then shrugged his shoulders.

Both of them closed their eyes and got disappeared. Within fractions of seconds they were seen in their respective Drift Disks. After taking a full round of the Earth, they returned to Loa Loa..

Vibra tested the bluish-green ball. He concluded that it was nothing but a living plant. More specifically an algae---Blue Green Algae. This algae had a special property. It could convert all the elemental oxygen into water. Vibra guessed that the next time he visit the Earth, he would see traces of water there.

He went into the earth after about a week or so. He saw more of blue-green algae lying in water. He went further and saw more of algae of different colors--red, brown, green, blue etc. He was amazed at the colours.

After another week he again went to have a round inside the earth. This time, he saw rivers of water and a many gaseous water vapours forming clouds. He was astonished at the development. He couldn't guess what more would happen in this blue earth which was just a little unstable mass of he trivalent element at first. It was all incredibly unbeleivable and non-believable!

In his fifth visit, Vibra found many plants which were very simple in body form and system. Slowly they grew complex.

In the subsequent visit, he found seas and oceans fully ready. He was roaming about and suddenly it started raining. He disappeared on the land and appeared inside his Drift Disk. He took the rain water in his palms and smelled them. There was no typical smell. He tasted it. It was very sweet and fresh. He drank more of it, till he felt satisfied. After about a month, he observed that little motile animals have started taking birth. Who made these animals? How did they appear? This was all an unsolvable mystery.

Vibra went inside the Earth to see the conditions over there. He was observing the little colorful sponges inside the sea. He observed some sponges joining together to form coral reefs. After sometime he went outside to sit by the sea shore. Suddenly he was hit hard by something which felt like a stone. He looked around nobody was there. A fast moving stone like thing fell hardly on his toe.

"Ah, somebody is throwing some whity thing on me from the sky!!" Vibra cried out.

He looked up and saw the white hard ice-stones were precipitating heavily. To save himself he disappeared and went inside the Drift Disk. About an hour later the hardness of the ice changed into soft snow. He saw beautiful shapes of snowflakes falling down the sky. He went outside He felt the cold ice-flakes on his naked body. He extended his palms and gathered some snow. He smelled them. No smell again. He tasted it. It tasted like cold water. He could make out that water exists in three states. He had witnessed all of them. In the next month, he went inside the Earth. It was extremely cold and very dark. He turned the regulator inside his Drift Disk to the hottest temperatur and turned on the lights of his Drift Disk. He observed the plants in almost the same conditions. He kept on observing it for may years. There was not much change. Then, after a decade, he observed soft bodied animals floating on the water surface. They were special comb bearing animals. They gave a typical rainbow coloured specrum when sunlight passed through them. They would shine like firefly in the night. They showed bioluminiscense.

After many centuries and decades, Vibra observed complexity in both plants and animals. Slowly slowly, as years and centuries and decades passed by, he observed complexity incresing from the comb bearing jelly like animals to flat worms, roud worms, insects, spiny animals, aves, reptiles, dinosaures, monkeys and finally, a man-like hominid creature was seen walking on the Earth.

Vibra was unaware of the intelligence of these creatures. He thought that aliens were the most intelligent species in the universe. He saw a hairy man walking. His posture was bent down. He was very hefty. Soon, after many decades he observed many changes in the posture of men.

He found that these men were very active and struggled for survival. He would hunt animals and eat them. Vibra was once roaming in his Drift Disk and his eyes got attrated to a beautiful lady human. He was looking at her from his Drift Disk.

"Hey see!! SEEE!! There is an Unidentified Flying Object in the sky!!" little human kids were shouting. Their parents looked at the sky and they too started howling wildly, "OOOhh!! A UFO! See, an alien is sitting inside it!!"

Vibra quickly hit a jockey inside the control box of his Drift Disk. The Drift Disk grew faint, faiter and finally disappeared. The media reporters were too fast. They reached the spot and shooted the video of the the disppearing of the UFO. They clicked photographs of Vibra too.

In the televisons the news reader read out:                                                                                        

                                   

The alien with shiny eyes and no hair: 

   

The UFO which was witnessed by people is:

Let us have a look at the interview taken by the Gujarati Media Reporter, Miss Neha Ben:

                                                                       

                                                                       

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Dracula
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Hey Eros! First of all, let me say how much I love the extra addition of IMAGES AND ILLUSTRATIONS! That's something rarely seen on Yewis and I love it when people include them.

I just found some minor errors to fix. Overall, this chapter is quite well polished.

Vibra tok a sample of the green ball and said, "I'll test this in my lab."
Vibra took*.

Arch looked first at the ball and then at Vibra and thenshrugged his shoulders.
You're missing a space in this sentence.

It was all incredibly unbeleivable and non-believble!
Unbelievable and non-believable mean the same thing, and you only need to use one (I would suggest the first word). Although I think you might have been doing this for emphasis and if that's the case, go for it! Just check your spelling.

He ould make out that water exists in tree states.
Could is missing its 'C'.

He found that these men were very active and struggled fr survival.
You forgot the 'O' in for.

In the telivisons the news reader read out:
Televisions* is the correct spelling.

I loved your description of how life on earth was constantly evolving. One second we had worms, and then there was suddenly a news team reporting on the aliens! This super fast transition from one stage of evolution to another emphasizes how little 'time' means to these aliens. They are like gods, a year to us is a second to them. It was a good perspective. Well done!

Hmm...exactly! This is what I was trying to say, Dracula! I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much for the review and it helped me to correct the mistakes.

Hi I'm here again to review your chapter. Like I have said before I like the moistens and the characters and the name of the story.

I like the why you descripted this part of the story.

He looked up and saw the white hard ice-stones were precipitating heavily. To save himself he disappeared and went inside the Drift Disk. About an hour later the hardness of the ice changed into soft snow. He saw beautiful shapes of snowflakes falling down the sky. He went outside He felt the cold ice-flakes on his naked body. He extended his palms and gathered some snow. He smelled them. No smell again. He tasted it. It tasted like cold water. He could make out that water exists in tree states. He had witnessed all of them. In the next month, he went inside the Earth. It was extremely cold and very dark. He turned the regulator inside his Drift Disk to the hottest temperature and turned on the lights of his Drift Disk. He observed the plants in almost the same conditions. He kept on observing it for may years. There was not much change. Then, after a decade, he observed soft bodied animals floating on the water surface. They were special comb bearing animals. They gave a typical rainbow coloured spectrum when sunlight passed through them. They would shine like firefly in the night. They showed bioluminescence.


I want you to carry on doing this. :D
And I don't think the pitchers at the bottom are necessary.

And that is all I hope you have a nice day/night. Oh and let me no when your next chapter is out.

Happy review day by the way. :D

Thank you so much for the review, Tsunami! I includded the pics here because I wanted to show that these were thepics shown in the T.V. I wanted the reader to see the T.V. with me...haha! :D have a nice day/night to you too, my friend!

Okay if that is why you wanted the thepics their for then you keep them there.



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