DoubleOJell0

Ok, time for a review! The first thing I noticed is that your keep saying how deadly it is...a bit too much, so watch that. You didn't do any grammar ...

Ok, you reviewed my poem so I will review yours back. So in the sentence: "oh now that's just grey" with an awful feel in my gut. You forgot to ...

Even though it sounds like you rushed this, I kinda like it: the rhymes are really good and un-forced, so that's good. I also like the plot of this, it's ...

I like how you write these poems. It sounds like a modern-Shakespeare. Anyway, the ryhmings you picked aren't that common, which I like. You forgot some " in some dailogue. ...

Yay, time for a review! I always say that when I do a review...Ok, now this story was a little rushed, not much details. It's a common mistake, I do ...

Why is big bang losing now :( . Anyway, Time for a review! Ok, you did really good at giving the reader a feeling, Depression and pure sadness. So that's ...

Glue is master race. Anyway, time for a review in this September Review day!!! OK, you describing about caring for a child. And when the baby called her "Mama". You ...

Yay, review time! Ok first of all, you need to put a space after a comma. And same goes for periods. Second is: BEFORE YOU PUBLISH IT, CHECK SPELLING AND ...

I don't usually read "romantic" things especially when it has drama, but this was really interesting. Was the person's love a surgeon? Anyways, here are somethings that I don't like: ...

Yay, time for a rev-OH GOD ALL THE OF THOSE TRIPLE-DIGITS-MISTAKES!!! Ok, here are the "MISTAKES": Put commas, it's very important to place them. A lot of spelling and grammar ...

Ok, this is even shorter than my poems (Sort of). There are quite a few mistakes here though: "I stumbled onto air" "And I fell down the stairs" "Air" and ...

Ok, this is was really interesting! There was only two mistakes that I caught: "Guests- asking me what my aim in life was." I'm not sure why you putted the ...

So... you made this song from multiple versuses? Well, if that's true.. I have no idea what to say..... But I really like that picture,If you made it, then good ...

This is going to be my seventh review today!!! Ok, there are some mistakes, such as: "“Too bad. Now get out of my way before I snap your neck!¨ In ...

Ok, time for a review for a poem again!!! YAY! The only mistake I caught was: "True love is my god" Should be "True love is my God". "God" instead ...