Demeter

Hi Ingrid! Welcome to YWS! I love your name, by the way. :) This was certainly emotional. I sort of liked that this was kind of short, because this described ...

Hi, Maddy! At first I wasn't sure whether I would like this all that much, but I really liked the narrative twist the poem took towards the ending. I like ...

Hi Adriana! Welcome to YWS! ^_^ I quite liked this! You had a cool rhyme scheme going on and some interesting thoughts, even though the mirror thing and reflections can ...

Hi Sak965! Welcome to YWS! :) If I had to describe my reading experience in one word, it'd be something like "fine"! I thought there were some nice elements here ...

Hi there, Znale! Nice to see someone writing their thoughts about friendship. :) I agree with some things that you say, but there were a few bits that I didn't ...

Hi Elinor! So excited to see all the entries! :) I think you chose quite an interesting setting and scene; flash fiction is lovely because it lets you experiment maybe ...

Hey Kafka! Glad to see you're taking part in this contest, it sounded so cool! (By the way, it's lilymoore's contest, not Lauren's. ;) ) I liked this. Even with ...

Hey Lycando! I already read this yesterday, but I'm not sure why I didn't review then, probably forgot! :P I liked this quite a lot - the character definitely comes ...

Hey Soulkana! "Father, what's-" I started to question when a harsh slap to my face sent me flying across the small space to land right beside the friend who grinned ...

Hi Maddy! I looked at your other poem called "Not Myself" and now this one, and I think I like this one better! The topic is a bit dark and ...

Hey Threnody! :D She wore a stiff red dress, two painfully tight brown braids bound with ribbons of the same colour Are the ribbons red or brown? Red would seem ...

Hi there, Freedomgirl! I'm not quite sure where to start, actually. I think I'll start from the technical bits and then comment on the actual story. :) Okay, so when ...

Hi there Serenya! I think the power outage thing is such a cool topic for a story! I was really excited to find out more. I've never read anything like ...

Hey Siobhan! Interestingly, my favourite stanza was the first one, and my least favourite one was the last one. The first one made me feel like there was something really ...

Hi, Izzy! Hope you're liking YWS so far :) First and foremost, I'm going to be quite firm here and tell you to proofread before posting. Proofreading is the key ...