Deanie

I loved this writing. It had a kind of flow to it. I loved how someone was asking someone questions, obviously someone more wiser than the asker. I don't have ...

I loved this short story. It was really beautifully written. I thought the descriptive language was great, it even reminded me of a poem. I think it was a good ...

I love this poem. It made me smile. Its really simple but shows so much. I can't really say that much. Not a very meaningful comment, but I think it ...

Very cute poem, straight from your heart. Sounds very free. I like the last verse best. It kind of relates to me and writing. Keep it up! Deanie x

I found this poem very interesting. It made something really boring sound really wonderful... And it takes a lot to do that! I found the imagery amazing and cannot see ...

I really like this poem. The description and imagery are amazing and the last line sums it up really werl. Keep Writing! :)

Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, ...

I like this poem. I really can relate, all too much... I did notice at first you didn't rhyme and then you did but thats okay... I was just wondering ...

This is short and the meaning is clear. Nice!

Simple, short, and really nice. I really like the descriptions in this poem too. I love it just how it is, but it would've been interesting what you might of ...

Really simple, and very beautiful. I like how its short but nice, and just words that all concludes to one thing. Great job!

I really like this poem! I really like how it is two people talking and one of them is always repeating what the other person is saying. It's really good. ...

Its nice and light but a little... I don't know, not inspiring? All it is saying is the sun gives light, it was a good try, but I think you ...

First things, I really liked your title, it made me want to read this poem. I think the poem is amazing! I love it. Not much else to say about ...

I really love this poem. It is so sweet and cute. I know this isn't a very helpful comment but I really like your poem! :) Keep writing