Five Months

by LisaMCooper

Published July 3, 2011

Spoiler! :
Sorry. But because I have joined HubPages, I must remove my works from any other site they show up on. If you would like to read any of my works or Five Months, please go here: Lisa Cooper's HubPages

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LiesOnLies
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LiesOnLies wrote a review Review · Jul 23, 2011

I checked that site out and it seems that lyrics isn't something that they are paying for. They pay more for articles that are helpful to other people. You are able to post other writings, but they only pay for the articles they deem important.
So it really wasn't necessary to delete your work here...just thought that would help...but your'e still free to do as you will

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LisaMCooper commented Comment · Jul 23, 2011

Sorry. But they're paying me to post, so it isn't a matter of just joining a new site. It's a matter of getting paid to post and I kinda need the money. So again, I'm sorry that this seems like a bunch of bull, but, its the business I'm in.

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LiesOnLies
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LiesOnLies commented Comment · Jul 22, 2011

that's stupid that you have to delete your work on other site...if a site makes me delete my work from other sites it's not worth being part of that site.

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LisaMCooper commented Comment · Jul 4, 2011

dolwright wrote:Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was from a personal experience, well, at least something good came out of it, I've been there too, and your lyrics made me feel like I'm not alone. thank you for writing this.

Wow! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! :D

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dolwright wrote a review Review · Jul 4, 2011

Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was from a personal experience, well, at least something good came out of it, I've been there too, and your lyrics made me feel like I'm not alone. thank you for writing this.

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LisaMCooper commented Comment · Jul 3, 2011

Rubz wrote:This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed are the hearts that can bend, for they shall never be broken." We all hurt, just don't let yourself break :)

Thank you! ^^ And yes, I was writing this thinking of personal experience. And again, thank you, I am feeling... Better than I was before I wrote this. Also, I promise I won't let myself break. :)

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Rubz wrote a review Review · Jul 3, 2011

This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed are the hearts that can bend, for they shall never be broken." We all hurt, just don't let yourself break :)

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LisaMCooper commented Comment · Jul 3, 2011

Deanie wrote:Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, not my sing, I sound like a cat being squished by a car'.

Good job!


Thank you. :)

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Deanie commented Comment · Jul 3, 2011

Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, not my sing, I sound like a cat being squished by a car'.

Good job!



I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson