Published February 12, 2011
I just learned cinquain poetry from our home room teacher. It is a 5-line non-rhyming diamond shaped poem that uses a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. Line 1: noun (serves as title). Line 2: two adjectives. Line 3: three gerunds. Line 4: eight syllabic phrase. Line 4: noun (summing up what what the poem's about).
Here is a sample of the cinquain poems I made. I'm not that good yet, sorry.
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It's short and sweet, like all cinquains, but you really touch the heart kinda. At least it touched my heart.
Really simple, and very beautiful. I like how its short but nice, and just words that all concludes to one thing. Great job!
I remember this back in the day. very nice little piece. Simplistic and real keep it up, you manage to capture the style and feel without seeming manipulative.
Well done!
I like it! An interesting style of poetry.
This was quite great, keep it up!
Very nice, and so true!
Keep up the good work.
Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight.
Firstly don't sell yourself short, this is great. In factm I don't have any improvements for this, I like it exactly how it is.
GReat work!
-Amie
Very nice, a great example!