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Darlet

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Health Re: The desire for motherhood

    Hi cherie, thank you for sharing your eggselent work - I'm here with an egg-inspired review for you today! Note: please know that I'm an idiot who's reviewing this at ...

    Aug 1
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: ​A Vast Land of Eyes

    EYES (Looking at descriptions) Painting of eyes, of you and him. Vivid. Longing. Love. (Yes sorry that I'm so vague when I'm in reviewing poet mode.) EARS (Looking at dissonants ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Journey to the End of My Soul

    Okay joos since you're basically one of my best friends and favorite people I of course had to review something of yours, but I'm bad at this so be warned. ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i miss her

    EYES (Looking at descriptions) A painting of longing for a lost friend.. A vivid painting, the meaning clear. I like how you show summer through lemonade and counting caterpillars and ...

    May 30
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Cadell’s dark demons

    EYES (Looking at descriptions) A painting of a boy believed to be a monster, hmm? And maybe he is. If he is, he definitely doesn't like it. Well done. The ...

    May 30
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: It's that simple

    EYES (Talking about descriptions) A painting of love, very vividly done! But that's not all. There are also colors of feelings of unworthiness shining through, aren't there? A short summary ...

    May 22
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Diamond Eyes

    EYES (Looking at descriptions and my perceived meaning of the work) A painting of gems this time! Interesting! I know it's a metaphor thingy but now I'm picturing the guy ...

    Apr 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Lady Who Carries A Torch (By Jasmine)

    EYES (Talking about descriptions and my perceived meaning of the work) The descriptions. Are. Amazing. This work paints a thousand different images, each vivid and beautiful. You illustrated liberty w

    Apr 11
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Out of all the Stars, You.

    EYES (Looking at descriptions and my perceived meaning of the work) This work paints a sky of stars and splendor, and I love it! Though there are sextilians, quintillions, billions ...

    Apr 11
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: it's okay

    EYES (Looking at descriptions and my perceived meaning of the work) You painted an image from the start, of Death standing there with his scythe and red eyes. (With 'painting ...

    Apr 10
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Why Can't I Let go.

    I love it. I like all the lines so much that I can't choose favorites. You painted a delicious (delicious is just one of my words for exceptionally beautiful) image, ...

    Apr 7
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Seven Minutes Left -- Introduction

    I'm very bad at putting this into words but it's lovely and I love it and it's beautiful. You painted an image almost immediately, which can be quite a feat ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Burnout

    Gewei here to lift this amazing work out of the green room! First off, your rhyming is amazing. It's way harder than it seems to make things rhyme, yet you ...

    Apr 6
  • Poetry » General, General Re: World-Eating Plant

    I read it aloud in my mind, if that makes sense, and it was fun. I'll do it for real sometime today too, promise! (I'll share about my result in ...

    Feb 9
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: Lambent Lavender Lights| lambent

    Firstly, your writing was amazing. I didn't expect to be able to actually get through this whole chapter as it's so long, but you kept my eyes here, to the ...

    Jan 28


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