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Re: Ink and Silver
Hello! Cat here. First thing: I just wanted to say that I LOVE THIS POEM. "I adored how gentle his heavy hands could become, and the silver tip that left ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: Butterflies
Hello! Killed Cat here. I know this is going to be a little repetitive, with so many other reviews, but this is an awesome poem and I want to help ...
May 28, 2014 -
Re: The Reaper In Black -- Chapter Two
Hi, Cat here. Urm, I just noticed one mistake, and it's not very big, but I thought I should mention it... "I don't wish you death." Shouldn't it be, "I ...
May 13, 2014 -
Re: My Brother.
This is beautiful! I'm a sister, too, so for me this is especially disturbing. :'( (I mean that in the best possible way, of course) 1 or 2 little nitpick-y ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Cannibal
Wow! This is so disturbing! I love how descriptive it is, and how the idea is horrible and fascinating at the same time. I know someone who once ate human ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Blink
Wow! This is creepy, but amazing! It's realistic and wrong at the same time. The "dream turning into reality" concept is so cool! And I love the end! Its SO ...
Apr 29, 2014 -
Re: Ruining the Constellations (Burning Out)
This is perfect! I wouldn't change a thing. I get exactly what it means, and it's beautiful! My favorite part is: "She says she wants to go with him driving ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Sense
Whoa, this totally makes sense! (sorry, couldn't resist) :S I love this!! Personally, couldn't have described poetry better. I especially love the lines: "But if you give in breathe that ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Rain
Wow! I like! (*raises eyebrows, impressed*) Seriously, this is really cool! Oh, and I love the way it ends… "Rain, the one thing I love it is rarely near, just ...
Apr 15, 2014 -
Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 2
This isn't much of a review, but I didn't think it was quite a comment. Ava's so cute! My little brother is like this, but slightly more embarrassing. ;D I ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Old Films
Wow! This is great!! I love how descriptive your language is, and how you didn't just use the same cliches for everything. And you make the whole idea kind of ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: A Well of Memories - Part 1
I'd like to go ahead and rant about how amazing this is, but I have a few grammar and punctuation things to deal with first. First: "I stooped to pick ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: "Happy Birthday, Fred."
OK, I now have a broken heart. Nothing else to say, except, well, that this is just like something J.K. herself would have written. It's just sad enough to fit ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Balloons
(*SOB*) This is beautiful… I can't describe how sweet and just WONDERFUL this was to me. A girl and a guy in love, and- and- (*STARTS SOBBING LIKE AND IDIOT ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1
Hi, and welcome to the wonderful and crazy place called YWS! First off, how cool is THIS story?! I love the descriptions, and the words fit together perfectly! Still, I ...
Apr 1, 2014
