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Fifteen year old Nova Lesedi turned her face to the fading afternoon sunlight. Rose-pink clouds made their casual way across the seacolored sky. Nova sat under her tree, marveling that the sky took on her favorite color, as if it existed only for her.
Andrew Anwell is looking for you, a girl in her class informed her. Nova shrugged. She didn’t understand a single word the girl had said, and Nova didn’t bother to read her lips. So when Andrew Anwell came up behind her tree, Nova didn’t notice him. When Andrew Anwell came around the other side of her tree, Nova didn’t know he was there. When Andrew Anwell plunked down next to her and signed hello, Nova started, and signed back that he’d frightened her. He shrugged. She shrugged.
What do you want to do? He signed, careful to check with the Sign Language book he carried with him before asking.
I don’t know, Nova signed back.
What?
I. Don’t. Know. Andrew consulted his book.
You don’t know?
Yeah, Nova signed.
You do know? Nova exhaled.
NO.
Oh. Sorry, Andrew signed selfconsciously.
It’s okay. You’re getting better.
Thank you. I’m bowtie. Nova laughed.
You what?
Hang on. Andrew palmed through his book again, flipping pages back and forth. Nova watched his hands, hard on the outside but soft on the palms. Softer on the inside. Just like Andrew. Nova smiled.
I mean I’m trying.
Apparently not hard enough.
What? Andrew’s eyebrows scrunched together.
Nothing.
Okay. They sat and wondered. Nova broke the silence she couldn’t hear.
It’s hot, she signed.
You want something to drink?
No, I said it’s hot.
Oh, hot. Yeah, it’s hot. More silence that Nova couldn’t register. Nova didn’t mind beingDeaf. It wasn’t Deafness she minded; it was the inability to communicate with her best friend.
Nova.
What? Andrew couldn’t find the sign in his book, so he mouthed it slowly. “We should make water balloons.”
Watermelon? Nova signed.
“No, water. balloons.” Nova’s eyebrows scrunched adorably for a moment, then understanding slapped her. She nodded.
Water balloons. Sounds fun. They laughed at their favorite joke.
Tomorrow. We’ll play water balloons.
You mean with, Nova signed.
What? Andrew’s eyebrows asked.
We’ll play. With. Water balloons.
Yeah, yeah. Andrew nodded.
Okay, Nova signed.
Okay.
See you tomorrow. Nova waved.
Yeah. Andrew stood and left selfconsciously, checking behind him to see if she was still looking. She was.
The day after that became the Day of the Water Balloons in Nova’s mind. Andrew met
her at her tree as usual, startling her in a way only a boy can startle a Deaf girl. In his hands were two huge baskets of water balloons, all...Nova couldn’t believe it. Every balloon was blue, Nova’s favorite color. Nova had signed this to Andrew exactly once, four years earlier, when they met.
How did you remember? Nova asked.
How can I forget? Andrew answered, and Nova’s smile matched the sun.
Let me see, she signed. Andrew handed her a basket. Nova pretended to have a look, then took off with the basket, pelting Andrew with balloons behind her as she went. She wished she could hear Andrew’s laughter.
Two hours later, they were out of balloons and breath. They laid under the tree, trying to breathe.
What now? Andrew signed. Nova sighed.
I don’t know. A silence Nova didn’t mind not hearing.
Nova.
What? Andrew propped up on one arm and looked at her.
I love you.
No you don’t. Nova rolled her eyes.
I’m serious, Andrew signed.
You’re only fifteen, Andrew, Nova signed back.
So?
So you don’t know what love is. Andrew looked at her, confused.
Slowly, he signed. Nova sighed.
You. Don’t. Understand. Love.
And you do? Andrew signed.
No.
So you know I don’t? Andrew signed slowly.
Nova hesitated, before signing, No.
Exactly. Silence sat between them.
I do like you, Andrew, Nova signed.
You do?
Yeah, Nova signed again. Andrew grinned and handed her his last hidden water balloon.
Nova Lesedi walked down the stairs, decked out in a prom dress her favorite shade of blue. At the bottom, her father stood with Andrew Anwell.
Nova, you look beautiful, Andrew signed.
Thank you, Nova signed back. So do you. Andrew laughed, looking selfconsciously down at his slightly rumpled suit.
Let’s go.
Wait, wait, signed her father. Pictures first. Nova’s father directed her to the mantle of their fireplace. Andrew slipped a strong arm around her waist. Nova’s heart flew.
Perfect, her father signed. Now you can go.
Thanks, dad.
Have fun, sweetheart, he signed back. Andrew directed her outside to his dad’s car.
Fancy, Nova signed. Andrew rolled his laughing eyes.
Shut up, he signed back.
The ride was silent because Andrew couldn’t sign and drive at the same time.
Oh, I brought you something, Andrew signed as they pulled into the parking lot of the RitzCarlton.
What? she signed. Andrew held up a blue water balloon.
Don’t you dare, she signed. Andrew grinned.
I won’t, I won’t. I just wanted to celebrate today.
Three years is a long time.
I agree. Nova took the water balloon. And pelted Andrew with it. “AAAARRRGHHH!” Nova laughed, and, after a moment, so did Andrew.
You are insane, Nova Lesedi, Andrew signed. Nova’s shoulders shrugged.
Nova Lesedi came down the aisle, wearing her favorite shade of blue ribbon around her white wedding dress. On the end stood Andrew Anwell, who stood stockstill, absolutely captivated. Nova’s eyes said everything her voice couldn’t.
You look beautiful, Andrew signed.
So do you, Nova signed back. Andrew’s face was too nervous to laugh.
Several hours later, Nova and Andrew stood at their reception table. Andrew decided to break protocol and give his own toast.
When I first met Nova, he signed. I had no idea I would marry her one day. It wasn’t until we were fifteen that I realized I loved her. She didn’t believe me when I told her. But I bet she believes me now.
Andrew turned toward his new wife, took a blue water balloon out of his pocket.
When I first told her I loved her, Andrew signed. I gave her this. Now, it’s become a promise. My promise to her that I will always love her until I die.
The tears in Nova’s newly wedded eyes couldn’t help but dance for joy.
Nova Anwell, now 72, stands before Andrew Anwell’s grave, holding a blue water balloon. Thank you, she signs. She places her promise over his heart, and walks away.
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This is really touching indeed. I really like how the blue water balloon was so symbolic. But the time skip was kinda confusing when you did it first. But rather than that i feel this story is beautiful. Thank you for giving us such a wonderful read.
OMIGOSH! SO SAD! But good too! It was just a bit choppy, but other than that, love, it was per-fect!!!!!!!! I loved the touch about Nova being deaf. It was just a bit hard to follow at times, because there were no quotation marks. If you just made it a bit longer, it could even classify right up there with 'The Fault In Our Stars.' Keep writing!!!!
Whoa calm down, TFIOS is untouchable.
BUT THANK YOU FOR WARMING MY HEART AND CURLING MY SMILE.
HAVE A GREAT DAY
(*SOB*) This is beautiful… I can't describe how sweet and just WONDERFUL this was to me. A girl and a guy in love, and- and- (*STARTS SOBBING LIKE AND IDIOT AGAIN*)
Thank you so much, this is just perfect.
(I'm gushing. I gush only when it is absolutely worth it. :') )
~Curiosity(killed the)Cat
I'm glad you liked it!! That means so much to me ^-^
Be on the look-out for a full-fledged novel based on this.
Will do, Mam!
Hello, Ongoeslife here to review!
This was such a wonderful piece!! I have Deaf friends, so that fact made it even more endearing to me.
There were a couple of things in the first paragraph that could be changed. My comments are in bold.
I don't really have anything else to nag on! I loved this piece. You should get it made into a movie; I'd buy it and cry every time I watched it. <3
Wonderful job! The way you have written this makes me wonder if you have any personal experience with Deafness?
Keep it up!
~Ongoeslife
Thank you! I made some changes according to what you said, because you're pretty right.
And yes, over the summer I was learning Sign Language, and my neighbor took me to a Silent Dinner with some of her Deaf friends from our church. I learned so much, and I love the language! I highly recommend learning some ASL.
Oh, that sounds wonderful!! I've been teaching myself ASL for the past five or six years, and only this past Christmas got a textbook for it. I'm hoping to be able to teach some classes next year to upper elementary/middle school kids.
That's so cool!! I've been dying to practice and get better, but my neighbor went off to college so now I have no one to sign with! Good luck with your teaching, you'd be great!!
I'd probably eat the kids. XD
Nutella goes great on 11 year olds. But the six year olds are a little crunchy for my taste.
You have to boil the six year-olds first. Then you can fry them in butter. Kinda like a potato.
Ooooh I'm gonna have to try that! Can I get your recipe? I have this great recipe for grilled nine year olds that you will ADORE. The chives really bring out the flavor.
*Waits for a mod to lock us both up*
Sounds better than eating them raw; I never have figured out a better way.
*looks around, whispers*
The secret is in the sauce.
*widens eyes*
*nods sagely*
The last couple sentences got me. This is amazing, taking an object not a lot of people look twice to and turning it into the entire story. A possible edit would be leading into time changes. For example your last few paragraphs did a good job in showing the changes.
I can't say how much I loved this...it was too good for words and the speech barrier compelled me from the very beginningvto read more. You are excellent at getting the readers attention. And the imagery was splendid, the motif of the balloon reminded me of the movie up (an awesome movie). I also really like when nova mentioned how there was silence around her that she couldn't hear...it made me really empathize with her.
The characters were brilliant, too, but I think you could have done more with them. The only barrier or problem in the story is the language issue, which makes their situation bitter sweet. I think that you could easily include another problem. Maybe Andrew is ridiculed for liking a deaf girl or something... It doesn't have to be complicated.
And one thing that bothered me was the abrupt changes in time. One minute their teenagers, then they are graduating, then they are married, and then she is old and he is dead. Dont get me wrong, I really liked how you included the different stages of life, but I think it could have been conveyed in a simpler fashion.
Anyways, keep up the good work! I really loved this story and would like to see more like it.
Beautiful <3
WHAT A COMPLETE TEARJERKER. I'M CRYING. I'M SO SORRY BUT THIS MADE ME VERY SAD. IT'S BEAUTIFUL.
Anyways, only a few problems with this story (And I'm terribly sad to have to point it out).
The transitions between the different times are choppy. Perhaps use a phrase or a sentence that helps us along and get to know what's going on?
Other than that, IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL. I HAVE FEELS FOR THIS STORY. THANK YOU SO MUCH. THIS IS A BRILLIANT STORY JUST THANK YOU.
<3
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Yeah, I've gotten the same comment from a few friends...I'll have to work on that. One friend suggested writing a prequel, in which I expound on their life together so maybe I can redeem myself with that!
I certainly agree with what your friends suggested! Keep writing! This topic is awesome!