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Okay. I liked this. You took a girl from a jungle, put her into our world, and showed the stark contrast of what we had then that was good and ...

So, interesting rhyme. It made me feel like I was reading a nursery rhyme. That partly freaked me out. And I'm partially German, so we got the market on weird-tales-to-scare-children, ...

I'm assuming this is a prose poem, yes? It's--I haven't seen something like this before. Could be a good thing. Could be I'm not as worldly as I try to ...

Okay, so you have an interesting poem here. I get a pretty good setting--outdoors, I presume--and I get a feel for the character. They're sad, but they realize that they're ...

Okay, so you have an interesting poem here. I get a pretty good setting--outdoors, I presume--and I get a feel for the character. They're sad, but they realize that they're ...

Okay, so, Cas here to review. First off, it's simplistic, but I can see the raw emotion in it. The imagery isn't half bad. It's similar to a bit I ...

Whoa. Okay, this was rather brilliant. I will now compare this to Frozen Fire , because it took me on a little sixth-sense-weirdness trip. I could picture this. I'm not ...

So, I'm in a weird position. I can't really say much about this. I'm sort of awed by you right now. The flow of this was amazing (I legit read/sung ...

Interesting. I didn't get too much emotion from this piece, not particularly sure why, but it was rather clear was was going on. Beast is stalking a human (I believe), ...

So, this was rather simplistic. -tilts head- Admittedly, I've read one two line poem before (poet was a smart one--17 syllables, just like a haiku) and loved it. I feel ...

Hey! Cas here. First off, I love this. The pictures it put into my head are lovely. I can't help but think of any Russian historical fiction when I read ...

Okay. So, the poem was enjoyable. In general, it came together well and its message was clear. There was little abstraction. It seemed more a short, creative monologue than poetry. ...

Okay. So, we got the beginnings of a familiar story. See: Moses. Jesus. Part of aSoIaF. All/some of the boys rounded up, slaughtered. Archetypal event. Then again, rounding people up ...

Curious premise. It started out as a teen rom-com in nature, then turned into some paranormal killer-on-the-lose sort of thing. As I prefer scary to romantic, the continuation of this ...

Okay, so, this was interesting. I get a vague idea of mercy, of cold winter, and a wolf-like or actual wolf protagonist. It's enough to interest me simply. However, all ...