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Re: Never Cry Crud: Nonsense Verse
Hey Radrook, time for me to take a spot in the light once more. Time to Review. I love the rhyming scheme that you have going in the first stanza. ...
May 9, 2018 -
Re: A Souls Heaven-4 A Poem Serial
Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I hope that I don't offend you in anyway possible. Now onto the review! "Golden light shines upon the kitten's grave, She rises from ...
Apr 11, 2018 -
Re: Lie of the Cats Life Preview
Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I hope I don't offend you in anyway. Now onto the review! "...a histroy of heroes rising..." Just a simple spelling mistake, 'history' the ...
Apr 11, 2018 -
Re: You Always did the Opposite
Hey Radrook! You know what I am here for, let's get to it shall we? "... remain aglow." I'm just guessing but I believe that you meant to put a ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: How could they not have noticed? Genre [Drabble]
Hey Radrook! Corrupted Arrow here with a review. I think the 'Drabble' idea is really neat, I think it would be fun to see what you and others might be ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: First the Rain
Hey RedWingBlueSky! Corrupted Arrow here with a review, more or less I help with comma placement. If I offend you in anyway possible I apologize in advance. This is a ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: Lyre, Lyre
Hey TheSilverFox! CorruptedArrow here with a review! If I offend you in any way I apologize in advance. This is a good piece. I'm just going to be helping you ...
Mar 10, 2018 -
Re: Without me (Edited)
Hey Temptress! Corrupted Arrow here with a review! If I offend you in anyway I apologize in advance. I'm going to tell you straight out of the gate that this ...
Mar 9, 2018 -
Re: Wings
Hey Catalyn! Corrupted Arrow here with a review! if I offend you in any way, I apologize in advance. This is as really cute idea! There's just a few things ...
Mar 3, 2018 -
Re: With the setting of the Sun!
Hey Aadya! CorruptedArrow here with a review. Anything I say here is just constructive criticism, I don't mean to offend you in any way. (I might also make some very ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: You Tell Me Things I Never Thought I Would Hear From A Man Who Loved Me
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: How It "Used To Be"
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in ...
Feb 27, 2018 -
Re: Hearts Broken Like Chocolate
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in ...
Feb 26, 2018 -
Re: To Break the Crooked Clock
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in ...
Feb 26, 2018 -
Re: We all would be Atlas
Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend you in any way, I apologize in ...
Feb 26, 2018