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ConverseFireGirl

ConverseFireGirl

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Sandcastles

    Wow. What? How? HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO AMAZINGLY. HOW IS IT POSSIBLE FOR SOMEONE TO WRITE THIS GOOD?! This is so good! I am a fan of writing haikus ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Insomnia

    Hey there ReisePiecey, I love this work you've done! First of all, I love " I'm feeling 3 AM," Like it's an actual object to feel and like your character ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Health Re: Candles-Prologue

    YOUR AVATAR, OH MY! NUTELLA! A CUTE CREATURE EATING IT. I LOVE IT. AHH. Right, I like this a lot, so you've earned a like, follow and review from me! ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Just because

    Wooow. This is FABULOUS. You've most certainly earned this place in Literary Spotlight! Firstly, I like your rhymes, they're very effective and help the poem flow nicely along. The first ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: His Tears Cost 1M$

    Wow! This is amazingg! Firstly, I'd like to say I love the way that you've repeated the first and last line. It really adds effect to the poem and rounds ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Review, Dramatic Re: Burns

    Oh my. That is so amazing! :D First of all, I want to say I LOVE THE FILM CAST AWAY! :D It's such a great film and I think you've ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Vulnerable

    Hey, I think that this is amazing! When I was reading it I thought it was really good, and flowed just the way it should. Great work. I also loved ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back

    This is so good! I was drawn in by the title, as I am a HUGE FAN OF THE HUNGER GAMES OH MY LORD. You've portrayed Gale in a very ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Beautiful Imperfect Creation.

    Hey shinethroughthedark! Converse here for a reviewww! :D I like this a lot, it's a very nice poem and I thought that it was easy to read in the sense ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Stencilled whiteness

    I liked this a lot! Firstly, I was scrolling down looking for something to read and the title totally caught my eye. "Stencilled whiteness" It's such a good name, really ...

    Dec 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: I Am a Shell

    RachelLeeAnn, your works are really good!! This is a poem which is full of feeling, and feelings I can relate too as well! You've done a great job of communicating ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Shouting

    A good haiku here, I love writing them, as they're just short and sweet! It had meaning behind it, and was easy to read, but still made the reader think ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: A Haiku

    This is a really nice haiku. I often write them, and people always say to make them longer, which I find so hard! But I think this is short and ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Other » Other, Literature Re: The Box Exercise

    THIS NEEDS TO BE ON LITERARY SPOTLIGHT. Oh my... have you read my mind? This is exactly what I need for a current situation! Thank you so much! Right, this ...

    Dec 14, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Weather

    Review time! :) Firstly, I love this poem, and after seeing your comment below about formatting, I could read it way easier. (Not that it was hard to before but ...

    Dec 14, 2013


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly