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Re: Sandcastles
Wow. What? How? HOW CAN YOU WRITE SO AMAZINGLY. HOW IS IT POSSIBLE FOR SOMEONE TO WRITE THIS GOOD?! This is so good! I am a fan of writing haikus ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Insomnia
Hey there ReisePiecey, I love this work you've done! First of all, I love " I'm feeling 3 AM," Like it's an actual object to feel and like your character ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Candles-Prologue
YOUR AVATAR, OH MY! NUTELLA! A CUTE CREATURE EATING IT. I LOVE IT. AHH. Right, I like this a lot, so you've earned a like, follow and review from me! ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Just because
Wooow. This is FABULOUS. You've most certainly earned this place in Literary Spotlight! Firstly, I like your rhymes, they're very effective and help the poem flow nicely along. The first ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: His Tears Cost 1M$
Wow! This is amazingg! Firstly, I'd like to say I love the way that you've repeated the first and last line. It really adds effect to the poem and rounds ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Burns
Oh my. That is so amazing! :D First of all, I want to say I LOVE THE FILM CAST AWAY! :D It's such a great film and I think you've ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: Vulnerable
Hey, I think that this is amazing! When I was reading it I thought it was really good, and flowed just the way it should. Great work. I also loved ...
Dec 23, 2013 -
Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back
This is so good! I was drawn in by the title, as I am a HUGE FAN OF THE HUNGER GAMES OH MY LORD. You've portrayed Gale in a very ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: The Beautiful Imperfect Creation.
Hey shinethroughthedark! Converse here for a reviewww! :D I like this a lot, it's a very nice poem and I thought that it was easy to read in the sense ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: Stencilled whiteness
I liked this a lot! Firstly, I was scrolling down looking for something to read and the title totally caught my eye. "Stencilled whiteness" It's such a good name, really ...
Dec 21, 2013 -
Re: I Am a Shell
RachelLeeAnn, your works are really good!! This is a poem which is full of feeling, and feelings I can relate too as well! You've done a great job of communicating ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Shouting
A good haiku here, I love writing them, as they're just short and sweet! It had meaning behind it, and was easy to read, but still made the reader think ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: A Haiku
This is a really nice haiku. I often write them, and people always say to make them longer, which I find so hard! But I think this is short and ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: The Box Exercise
THIS NEEDS TO BE ON LITERARY SPOTLIGHT. Oh my... have you read my mind? This is exactly what I need for a current situation! Thank you so much! Right, this ...
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Weather
Review time! :) Firstly, I love this poem, and after seeing your comment below about formatting, I could read it way easier. (Not that it was hard to before but ...
Dec 14, 2013
