ClariceArrais

Hello Lieke! What a nice writing we have here. First I would like to comment on the approach you choose for the subject: How we would like people to react ...

Hello Chanta! Welcome to YWS! About your Poetry: I liked the way you told a story in so few words. You used the action verbs in a way you gave ...

Hello! Clarice Arrais with a review here. Let me tell you what I felt like reading. It was a progressive narration, nice scene descriptions, but a little too fast. This ...

Hello! Clarice Arrais with a review here! Your title is appealing, good choice of words, I loved the metaphors tree-wind for people. You let it well clear how this person ...

Hello! I loved the content!!! I can definitely see a novel or a short story from it. The way you place the key words "heaven", "tower", "realm", "heroes", "legends", "gods"... ...

Hello! I loved the theme (coffee is my favorite addiction ever!!!), I loved the words, I loved the content... But I missed a poem shape. I'm used to see poems ...

Hello! Clarice Arrais to a review here. I have no idea where to begin with. It was kind of tense, because of the intern moral readers carry with themselves. If ...

Clarice Arrais with a review here!!! I have to admit that reading this chapter, the other I reviewed makes more sense. I liked the way you introduce us the emptyness ...

Hello! Happy Review Day!!! I loved your poem, but I wanted to read more of it. I had a hard time unravelling what it was about until I read defyingravity01 ...

Hello, Clarice Arrais here! I know how it's like to write in your second language. You sometimes think one thing but when you put on the paper it comes all ...

Hi there! You have a natural gift for writing. The poor Ashley trying to walk and her mood did not change! I like this girl. As I said before, you ...

Hello again!!! I loved the way you started to describe her parents fighting. Loved! I laughed with “She almost felt sorry for the food.” Am I bad person for this? ...

Hello! Clarice Arrais with a review here. I would like to say when I first read this chapter I had not read the others. So my impressions will be limited ...

Hello! I read and re-read your chapter some times, so I am going to start with the positives: 1. Nice group of characters, we can know who are the playful ...

Hello! I read your poem and the reviews, but I have my own impressions printed in the back of my mind. I could feel pain, a deep search for meaning ...