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Re: Chapter 1
hey, londone here to review your work! Wow xD that all happened very quickly! The protagonist's fiancé is caught cheating, she finds out her father is dead, and then is ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Butterfly
hi there! i'm londone, here to review your work! This is quite the interesting piece. You seem to be trying to express something deep. I haven't actually heard this song, ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: Invisible
hi there, it's londone! i'm here to review your work. Though simple, this piece dove deep into me. I do agree that probably everyone has wanted to feel invisible, may ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: roses and shores
hi there, i'm londone, here to review your work. First of all, wow. I'm in love with this. Your style of poetry is beautiful, and I admire it. Very interesting ...
Apr 24, 2018 -
Re: Afterlife
hi it's me eleven i am ready to review 4 u remember that i'm a horrible human but i mean well sometimes, like right now so let's get started! Hey, ...
Apr 24, 2018 -
Re: Training Wheels
Hello! Londone here to review your piece. I enjoyed this poem an awful lot. It made me feel a variation of emotions, but the one that overruled was satisfaction. Your ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Yin yang.
Hello there! Londone here to review your work. This was a very simple piece about a very simple concept. Yin and Yang, two opposites that intertwine into one very powerful ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: u brok mi harte
Hello there! Londone here to review your work. This certainly made me giggle. You have an interesting way with words. If this was a new style of writing poetry and ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: You've Ruptured the World
Hello here, Londone here for a review on your piece. Before I become all formal, let me gush over how awesomely rapturing this piece is. You just have me reeling ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Ballad of the Introvert
Hello, this is Londone here to review your work! I enjoyed this. It had a nice message and I could relate. There were a couple typos, but that can be ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Tennessee Rose
Hey there, Wolfical! Londone here for a review. ... I am just blown away. I loved this so much, my heart was touched, and I swear, you are a wizard. ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: a bloody hero
Hello, Birdman! Londone here for a review. This short story was surrounded around the common concept of a lonely hero who is a total outsider. But you put your own ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: one half
Hello, Eternity! Londone here for a review. You've written a good piece that I enjoyed. The idea of it is just a bit cliche, but you've turned it into something ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: Lost In The World
Hello, livvydah! Welcome to WYS! I'm Londy (Or Londone more formally) and I'm here for a review. I liked this poem, and I liked your use of imagery. I kind ...
Nov 9, 2017 -
Re: Is This My Doing?
Hey, Flumadiddle! Londone here for a review. You lie, this was not written in five minutes So, I have good things to say about this. One is that it's a ...
Nov 9, 2017
