ChocolateCello

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so just a few minor things to point out. First off, everything would look a lot nicer indented. I've never mastered the skill of indenting on ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! So, like the last review said, this poem (I agree this should be categorized as a poem) is very vague. It left the reader ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! So, let's talk about your rhyming scheme. So, you're changing the number of lines in each 'section' or verse. (Is verse correct? Sorry, not ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay so first off, I'm on a mobile device in class right now so please ignore gramatical errors. I have to keep this short, its a challenge ...

Hey! Chocolatecello here! On a mobile device at school so this review is going to stay short and sweet. I really liked the meaning in this poem and you did ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay do I'm a bit tired right now, this won't be the best review. Everything flowed beautifully and you told a great story. Nothing felt forced and ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so i've read a lot of 'ended friendship' poems/stories (I relate well, I've been through this same thing) But this by far is my favorite. You ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so I always feel bad reviewing and not helping the writer improve, but honestly, nothing ned to be improved here. I loved the message in this ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! So, not the best when it come to reviewing 'meaningful poems' but I'll give it a shot. First off, did you mean 'slips' instead ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, I have to admit, being the music loving person I am, I've written a few songs about crushes in my past but I've never been able ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so I'm not the best with content editing so I'm going to avoid that. (Was that a bad sentence or am I just imagining it?) So ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so I really liked this. (Like the last two reviewers) I didn't really follow the story and message within but I don't think that matters. Everything ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so reviewing stories is not my strong suit. Actually, reviewing in general is not my strong suit. But I have a few little things to point ...

Hey! Chocolatecello here! So im currently writing on a mobile device while multitasking so this wont be the best review. The only problem I really noticed (Like i said, mobile ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! (I began reading this to the tune of 'silent night', is that bad?) Okay, back to reviewing. I don't have any content edits, just things like punctuation ...