Chevy

this IS a good poem--why i cant write like you...i may never know.

thanks for your comments--but i dont have any just really wicked (good wicked) poetry.

i thought this was intrigued me tremendously--i dont think you should changen anything. but i started not to read it because i HATE "Roses" by Outkast.

i wrote this poem @ some 2am so if it doesnt make a lot of sense,then you'll know why:-)

i think this poem was put together very well--i think it flowed really good. *two thumbs up*

well, serious poems dont always go so well when rhyming,but this one was really good--it didn't sound forced or like you were trying to rhyme. dont change a thing!

that was...strange...and um...well...strange...

wow.... 1word: POWERFUL.

I really liked it except for, "Then no more suit's, shoe's and tie's." You could change it to "Then no more suits nor ties" because otherwise you made it sound ...

i agree with nate--the end was kind of broken upbut i really,really, really liked the last stanza. the part about the shower kind of threw me off though. *shrugs*

it does sound like an indecisive little weed...i dunna know. my opinion. *shrugs*

i thought this was a good one when i wrote it,but now that i read it over and over, i see that its not so good. however, i would like ...

yeah, you did really well with the rhyming...better than i ever could, of course...some people are good with making their poetry rhyme. and then others,like myself, are rather unsuccessful.

okay so yeah, i tried this non-rhyming thing and this is what i came up with.like i said, thats not my gift but if you could tell me what you ...

okay, okay, rhyming is all i know but i'll try to use something else. also, i dont know what made me choose Boston.