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thanks not much of a poet, you know--im really trying--most of my poetry doesnt make a lot of sense and that leads me to say that i cant really give ...

well, actually, i started not to read this because of the just sounded kind of elementary and not as serious as the poem itself is. however, very well-written poem. i ...

hey.....i know YOU! you're muse from tywc...i just go through talking to you...anyways, nice goin'. this is a really good poem...i liked it a lot...don't change anything. inconsistent in some ...

i dont know the point. its just what i feel inside

Well, considering that you, Gracey13, are my younger sister: IT WAS HORRIBLE. lol, just kidding. anyways, I agree with Nate...dido to what he said.

I can relate as well. However, this poem started out sort of slow but after the first stanza, the pace picked up and it was enjoyable to read. Overall, good ...

I thought this was really nice. However, in the second paragraph it became slightly confusing...afterwards...you came back and regained clarity. Just change the second paragraph a little so it won't ...

well, being one of realistic fiction and historical fiction, i thought the subject matter was rather remorseful--i dont usually read things like this. however, your sentence structure was exceptional.

This IS rather powerful and I really enjoyed reading was fast-paced and the rhythym was consistant. Great poem.

it was rather abrupt and short in some places. however, i do not feel as though that should be changed. abruptiveness and shortness can sometimes be a sensational thing. for ...

Oh, this was just a beautiful, beautiful flow. I loved ever piece of it! Don't change 1 thing!

Nice poem. Nothing lasts too long, Like forever, So we must constantly look For someplace better. Undoubtingly sensational . Two thumbs up!

Wonderful. I wasn't as crazy about the poem at the beginning as I was about the rest. I must admit, your sentence structure was sensational. I loved every single word ...

all was good except for two things: 1. you spelled "desperate" like "deperate" 2. "Or woman" doesn't really have to be takes away from the poem. Good job anyway.

wait...wait...wait...its coming...wait a minute... YOU'RE K K P from TYWC! HEY! this is Chevy Chevelle The Kid Writer. *sighs* what a small world.