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Hey! I'm here to review your novel because I noticed you haven't gotten a single review. So let's get on with the review :3 I'll be doing my review in ...

Hey Annaclare, I like the idea of this poem but I feel like it has a lot of room to improve. So I'm just going to jump in: "I am ...

Hey, it's Alice here to review. Immediately I noticed that you had very small paragraphs but as I started reading, I noticed that it actually gave suspense and just improved ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem! I hope you find my review helpful, if you have any questions do not be afraid to ask. I'm here to help and ...

Hey! I'm here to review your short story :D I hope my review is helpful and sorry in advance if it ends up being short. "The air was cold, and ...

Hey! I'm here to review your chapter like you asked. I'm really sorry about how long it's been since you've asked. Usually I get reviews done quickly but when you ...

Hey! Sorry if this review ends up being short. I agreed a lot with what @Leekeer wrote and I don't want to repeat everything they said. I enjoyed this poem. ...

Sorry this review was so short >.< Hi! I liked this poem. As someone with general anxiety reading this poem was a nice friendly reminder to breathe and realize that ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem. Forgetting that those who are Leading you are imperfect, you This sentence doesn't make sense. "Leading you are"? Aim towards their "perfection". Whatever ...

Hey! I'm here to review your poem :3 Can can see by reading this that you have a natural talent when it comes to words. This was really beautiful. Your ...

Hey! I'm going to review this stanza by stanza :D I wish I wrote that song. The one about the girl Who falls in love with the boy at the ...

Hey! I clicked on this because I was really interested in your title. It seemed really cool and I just liked the title a lot. I was confused by the ...

Hey! So first things first, I liked this work and the idea of this work but I felt like it still had room for improvement (as most work does). The ...

Hey! I really liked this poem! For being your first it was really good. I think if you added more metaphors and maybe more literary devices it would make this ...

Hey! I hope my review is helpful! I really liked this poem! I think adding proper punctuation will help it a lot. The vocabulary that you used was really good. ...