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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 5 Things No One Told Me About Love

    This is a really beautiful poem. It's really nice to read because it's so short, but the words it uses carry so much meaning. The imagery is wonderful, and describes ...

    Aug 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: why do i even need to title this when no one will hear my message

    First of all, I want to say that I really liked this poem because I feel the same way a lot of the time. At home, I'm listened to, but ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drowning

    Hello! The title, I want to start by saying, is great. It's short, and simple, but interests the reader. These two lines in particular, also really interested me because of ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Maybe I Won't

    Hello! First of all, the title is very nice. It pulled me in and sounded interesting, so when I was looking through the list of poetry, this was the one ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: "Dear" God.

    Hello, the title made me interested in this poem, and I wanted to see what it was like. I am religious, but all the same I was interested, and I ...

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: If I die for you or I die for you

    Hello! First of all, the title is very nice and interesting, and made me want to read it. I think that you've got some deep thoughts here, but when I ...

    Aug 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Welcome to the Boulevard of Suicide

    Hello! I just read another one of your poems and this one caught my eye. First of all, the title is interesting. I liked it. It was unique and succeeded ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreams and Feelings

    Hello, I thought I'd come to review this because the title looked quite interesting, and it's eyecatching. While this has meaning in it, and I think it has very deep ...

    Jul 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Cavity

    Hi! This poem was really nice to read . . . it was short and sweet, but had a lot of meaning in it. I think the imagery is beautiful, ...

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy Re: Days.

    Hello! I was instantly drawn in by the title of this poem and I'm so happy that I saw it because this poem really resonates with me. I love how ...

    Jul 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ever since

    Hello! Since I've been on YWS, this is probably the most unique poems I have read, but I really enjoyed it. It was short, easy to read, yet packed with ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Hard

    Hello! First of all, you've got a very nice title. It's short, sweet, but still succeeded in attracting me. The same can be said for your first line - it ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Veil in the Wind

    Beautiful poetry! I have to say, your description is what steals the show for me. You paint a wonderful, clear picture in my head, and it's amazing to hear this ...

    Jun 18, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Simple Attraction

    Hello! I really like this poem as it's simple and easy to read, and sometimes when I'm online, I struggle with long pieces of work. The great thing about this, ...

    Jun 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: yellow fog

    Hello! I came to review this poem, as the title got me interested pretty quickly. It's simple, but it sounds like something good. I feel like this poem is very ...

    Jun 18, 2016


And then, as if written by the hand of a bad novelist, an incredible thing happened.
— Bartimaeus of Uruk