Hi this is Spartan 118 here for a super awesome amazing super awesome cool fun time review and I hope you love my review.
First off the title to this poem is really eye catching and it makes me wonder if you are ok and who you would die for. Second the main part of this poem is if the person you died for would even notice what you did for them. Third I want to know are you ok like this poem seems to be more of a depression poem more than anything. Now let's get into the grammar and punctuation. I didn't see or look for any grammar or punctuation errors nor do I care if there are any because I don't care if there is bad grammar or punctuation due to me not being a grammar or punctuation Nazi. Fifth if you died I bet a lot of people would be upset if you died.
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Points: 87
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