Charizard821

Well I must say, this is likely one of the better pieces I've read on the YWS. As many of the others have already said, it was quite simply beautiful. ...

YOU ARE THE BEST! Why? Because you wrote a positive piece! I'm a major optimist, so I naturally love seeing positive messages, and lately I've found there weren't enough of ...

Darn it! Another sad piece of writing. What is with them all lately? Oh yes, this is a review. I MUST REVIEW! I enjoyed the piece, I can tell you ...

This kind of upset me, actually. Don't worry, that's only because being in a new relationship myself, it's never fun to picture the future like this. Nevertheless, the piece was ...

I loved this piece. Being a frequent creator of poetry myself, I can definitely appreciate how this poem was conveyed. I honestly expected it to be happiness through-and-through, something I ...

An interesting first chapter. A few words on it. Length: this is just a personal preference, but in my opinion, every story should have a good couple pages of a ...

Wow. Such a dark piece. I need to tell you something. That line. That one line. "whose drowning". Despite it being spelled incorrectly, this line shook me. My eyes widened. ...

Yes! This poem was awesome! I love how you took something as well known and loved as mint (of all things) and soiled the name! You did an amazing job ...

I found this interesting. I must say, I wasn't too fond of the odd spacing of the stanzas in the piece. Other than that, though, this appears to have the ...

Ah, Gravity. It's been far too long. I see you still have that amazing something about you that most writers do not. Let's face it, this is not a story. ...

Nice work. This has some potential. My biggest suggestion would be to go back and re-read it. There were a few silly spelling mistakes that an editing run could easily ...

Wow! I'm making a call here, that this is getting on Literary Spotlight, and will be in the first position. Spectacular! Simply spectacular! I love how you portrayed girls for ...

Wow. Breathtakingly marvelous ending! I couldn't have written it better myself! No wonder this was on the Literary Spotlight! You, my friend, have managed to take something as innocent as ...

Certainly an interesting piece (though I was somewhat lost on the title). As far as grammar and sentence fluency goes, I have no issues to take up. It's amazing how ...

LLLLLLLLLET'S GET READY TO RUMBLLLLLLLLLLE! Charizard821 here for a review! I must say, this poem was quite unlike any other I'd seen. This is most likely because of the pure ...