Calito, hey, I just wanted to say that this one was great. I can't go without letting you know that this had amazing flow and that if you throw in some instrumental we will be in for one heck of a show.
RhymeBlizzard out.
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Calito, hey, I just wanted to say that this one was great. I can't go without letting you know that this had amazing flow and that if you throw in some instrumental we will be in for one heck of a show.
RhymeBlizzard out.
YOU ARE THE BEST! Why? Because you wrote a positive piece! I'm a major optimist, so I naturally love seeing positive messages, and lately I've found there weren't enough of them around here. But anyways, I loved this piece. In fact, the whole time I was drawing comparisons between it and my own relationship. I think I'll show this piece to my girlfriend, who coincidentally is also on the YWS. Oh yes, and it's getting a like from me. No question. ^^
This is so sweet, Carlito! <3
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