CarbRundum

Awwww. What a beautiful poem! Thanks so much for writing it! It means a lot to me. This is a review, though, so I do have to criticize it. But ...

Short, but sweet. 10/10 would read again. What an interesting story to write about! I've never read a poem like this. Pros: -It gets right to the feels. -It gives ...

DUDE That was so good! Argh, just as it was getting so interesting! Such riddles! Such mystery! But of course you had to end it, to draw me in even ...

Wow, that was a well written scene. I haven't read what this is supposed to go with, but just from this, I have enough information to make out what's going ...

DUDE DAT METAPHOR. I don't think I need to explain that last sentence. This story was so *sniff* touching. The imagery was really good, and the descriptions were detailed. The ...

I'll try to make a review for this poem (or at least what I call a review). First off, I like the style, since, let's be honest, no one writes ...

Great poem! I love how much passion you evidently poured into writing this. Although it had a pretty generic rhyme scheme, it was still very enjoyable to read. I think ...

Probably the best chapter thus far. I love the imagery and the useof figurative language. The sentence "I held onto those memories like a life raft in the sea of ...

I uh... ok. So, this poem is kind of depressing, not gonna lie. So there's a girl who's depressed and cuts her wrists and kills herself. I like the interesting ...

Short, but sweet. This is such a relatable piece (coming from the guy who owns way too many stuffed animals). It's very effective for getting the message across, that this ...

I really enjoyed this entry. There is definitely a very mysteriously feel to it. I enjoyed the superb imagery . For example, ''The image of my father crawling out of ...

Very realistic poem. I like the rhyme scheme since, while simple, it does add a lot to the poem. As someone who enjoys writing and creates art, I can say ...

This was a very... unique poem. I really liked the imagery in it. It's apparent that you wrote this while going through tough times. I also like the ending in ...

Very interesting. I liked the detailed descriptions and the post-apocalyptic future setting. I like how the characters are all believable in their actions and personalities. I also like how you ...

DUDE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!? I really liked this story. I enjoyed the vivid descriptions and the interesting concept. There was more than enough witty banter to go along with the ...