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Re: Sword Fight
So I'm gonna review. I think I'll say, most importantly, I was drawn to this piece of work because of the title. Oh, would you look at that: this was ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Dead in a Minute
Quick question: the name. Alex Drake. That wouldn't happen to be a reference to a certain BBC TV series would it? (Yes, if you think you know the one i'm ...
Dec 22, 2012 -
Re: Riot For Goodwill Or Vile....
(Review at the bottom) Goodness is depleting Every soul indifferently has fostering dreams for life. Attitude towards life is changing Depriciating lifestyle is the resultant of cause There is a ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: A Portrait of Defiance
Jo stared at Sherlock with wide eyes and an open mouth. She tried to speak but could not find her voice; it was hiding inside of her, cowering in the ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Holmes: Secret of the Vault part 1
Just a note to anyone who may come across this. I am writing this at the moment and when it's done I don't know whether I'll put it in this ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: The Saga Prolouge & Ch. 1
n a galaxy far away their lives the most evil being that do things like take whatever they want; kill each other for meaningless things like money and revenge. They ...
Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: Falling In Love at Oliver's Coffee Shop
Good work I'm not a fan of romance and I don't read romantic fiction. But I found this and decided it might be a good idea to read it. You ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: Salt on Tiger's Tail
This was a nice piece of work and I enjoyed reading it. So I'd like to say a very big well done to you. I've decided to copy and past ...
Dec 9, 2012 -
Re: How I feel about my Life.
Hello Now I'm not a Catholic so I don't know very much about the 7 commandments but I do know a little bit about Catholicism. I will say this though: ...
Dec 8, 2012 -
Re: Tick Tock Goes the Clock
Very good. That was a very well written poem with good rhyming and a chilling message. The best part of this poem was that there were no spelling mistakes and ...
Dec 8, 2012 -
Re: Alone and Damaged
Excellent, excellent, excellent. Excellent. That was lovely to read and the message that was wrapped inside of it was lovely. All kinds of people go through all kinds of pain ...
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Daddy Please
This was beautiful. Truly it was utterly heart warming and quite sad. I don't often feel properly, completely touched by things. It is very rare for me to read something ...
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Invisible Stars (Paley's Stars)
This was really quite wonderful! I enjoy poetry but when I read it I expect it to be good. This was better than good. This was excellent. Granted it was ...
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Change--A Senryu
Well... That was rather short. Well Short and Sweet that's what they say isn't it? This was a very nice few lines.
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Where Did I Go Wrong?
A very well written piece of work. I rarely read poetry but when I do I tend to enjoy it. However today I did not enjoy it. I REALLY enjoyed ...
Dec 7, 2012