Caitlynn

So I love the rhyme and flow of this poem. It's very relatable, I love the beginning and it wraps up quite nicely. "from the dark frights," with this line ...

I love how you twisted this around. The words you use are excellent, and I love the themes in this poem. I love Disney stories, but my favorite is when ...

Okay one word, Wow. I loved the word choice, and the flow in the poem. "Seeing my wedding dress of red lace, and the shoes heavy as lead." I love ...

Well that took a dark turn! First off I really love the flow, and structure of this poem. The ending has me shivering. Anyway I really like this line "A ...

Such a simple, short, but powerful poem. I especially love the ending, it ties it together very nicely. The imagery this poem provides is amazing, lovely job in that department. ...

This poem has a very deep meaning, not rare to see, but told in a rare way. I loved it, the imagery was beautiful. "I wear sunglasses, but they're not ...

Very sweet, however has a dark undertone. I especially love the ending, I feel like that was a beautiful way to end it. The flow is nice, and the words ...

It's simple, but very meaningful. The expressions are wonderful, and do well to create an image. "I've ran out of air," sounds awkward, and I suggest that you rephrase it ...

I like the first line within the poem. "they are a voice of mine i pretend is heard," I like this line, but I feel like it can be rephrase ...

It's a very nice song, with a relatable meaning. Everyone feels this type of feeling, it's simply naturally. I love the way you refer to it as 'hide and seek,' ...

The flow is excellent, and I especially love the line "to lift myself above the rain." Very relatable, with heartfelt emotion. I see a lot of potential and talent. However ...

I do like the general flow, and meaning of this poem. However "and not it is full of doubt." I feel like this is a little awkward, (if you read ...

Okay I must say.....I for one absolutely love it. The words you use are very lovely, and I especially love the line "Groaning and weeping you won’t leave me behind,Comforting ...

Okay, what first drew me in was, in fact, the title. I love Halloween, and will literally read anything that deals with the subject. Anyway let's see, it's kinda hard ...

So let me start. I love the concept of this poem, and find it extremely relatable, and beautiful. The words are well chosen, and the imagery within this poem makes ...