Okay, what first drew me in was, in fact, the title. I love Halloween, and will literally read anything that deals with the subject. Anyway let's see, it's kinda hard to tell what the poem is about, in the way where is it? The line "A great party and large crowds," makes me think it might be at a party, but is it really? (Yes, it did scare me, crowds give me an awful fright.) The words you use are very nice, but I do see room for improvement. Which means you can only get better!
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