First poem!!!!!!!!!

First off, I'm so sorry you feel this way, I hope you get better soon.
Second, this poem is really good. I loved it. Keep writing! I don't have anything else to say about it. Pat yourself on the back for a good poem.
Again, I'm sorry you feel that way. But I find poems always make me feel better. As always, keep writing, and happy New Year!

So let me start. I love the concept of this poem, and find it extremely relatable, and beautiful. The words are well chosen, and the imagery within this poem makes it very powerful. I especially like the line "All the mysteries yet so untold." I don't know why, but I absolutely love the sound if it. This poem was well written, and a great read. Keep writing.

Hey!

First, I would like to say welcome to YWS! I have seen some of your reviews, and they are magnificent! I am excited that this is your first poem, and I would love to know what title you would give this piece.

I think there needs to be a period after the word fine in the first line of this poem. The period after reflection should be a comma. There should be a comma after ago, and there should be a period after now (fourth and fifth lines). There should be a comma after the seventh and eight lines and a period at the end of the last line. I am adding these because you have put in some punctuation, and if it should be either all punctuation or non at all.

I love the meaning in this poem, and I think you have created and captured what it feels like to be different than who you thought you were supposed to be.

Thanks for the great read, I can't wait to read more of your work, and if you need anything else feel free to ask,
~Rascalover

Wow I know that feeling but don't give up
Ur stronger than you give yourself credit for
This poem is so relatable to everyone
I hope you keep writing!!!

Hi there!
I know it is late, but Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here, people are super helpful and nice here. Now, I'm going to jump straight into this review.
First off:
I love how relatable this poem is and how the simplicity makes this poem stand out.
Second:
Your last word on your last line is awkward. To smooth it out, I would either turn it into two lines like this:
"Tell me how to break free
From myself"
Or just say "Break Free."
I hope this helped!

Hi! I just saw this and I thought that I would take a small look.

I just want to say that this is a nice piece, you showed your feeling really well! I loved it. I just want to show you what my favorite part was, and help you a little bit.

MY favorite part was: "I trusted myself. Thought I’d be fine

Now, a stranger to my own reflection.

Don’t even know this face of mine.

I was okay years ago.

Better than these days now"

This showed good feelings. This made me sad, because it is so relatable.

What you could do to help:

You can just make it a little bit longer, to show more.

OVERALL: I LOVED THIS!!!!

~B.