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Hey there, Ita here to review. I'd just like to say, this is incredibly short. Very, very short. But it doesn't even pack that much interest, doesn't draw you in. ...

Hey Kyll. I -- I -- I'm surprised, really. Perhaps this is some inside joke or another, but, um... I don't see what meaning this has. Poetry isn't necessarily great ...

Hey there. I'll be reviewing as I read, so bear with me. The quote format is interesting, yeah, but unnecessary, as LadyPurple said. The first thing that struck me was ...

Hey there. First I'd like to comment on the title and the setting. Unlike Spinme said, I don't find it Assassins Creed-esque, but I do think, if you ever consider ...

Hey there. This is an interesting piece of work to say the least. I'm always one for murders and political intrigue, though I have yet to see that. I actually ...

Hey there. This is an interesting start to a novel or something, and it carries a lot of punch in these brief lines. Draws you right in. However, might it ...

Hey DNX. You asked me to review this, and so I shall. It's a good piece of work. I couldn't find mistakes at all, except for several tiny nit-picks. "Hey, ...

Hey Em, here to review. It's a good piece. You start things off rather well, setting the scene pretty quickly - the mood, as the piece does lack some quantity ...

Hey MM. Here to review, as guaranteed. I'll be reviewing as I read, so bear with me. The thing that struck me immediately is the fact that this isn't formatted ...

Hey Rocky. Here to review. Well this certainly takes the cake as the shortest prologue I've ever read, but it does give a few key events, which, however, I felt ...

Hey Pix. Reviewed chapter one, so it'd be only natural that I review the prologue. Unfortunately, I must agree with roostangar, even if his review was a little harsh. The ...

Hey Pix, here to review, as promised. Well, there isn't much to say about this (or rather, I don't find much to say). It's a good start to a story, ...

Hello MM. I've never seen your work, so I thought it'd be nice if I reviewed it. Grammatical imperfections first, on which I agree with DNX and Thunder. This had ...

Well, since I feel like celebrating the point system's return, here I am to review. A nit-picky thing (of little consequence) is that you open your prologue with a speech ...

Hello. I saw this on your wall, therefore I was intrigued and decided to take a look. Yeesh, not much to say, is there? You pack a lot of good ...