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Heyho there Pix, Ita here to review as requested. Let me start off with my overall impression of it: it was fairly good, a tad cliched, but that's just me. ...

Heyhay. Ita here to review your prologue. I'll review chapter one eventually. First thing first, whoawalloftext. Reviewers will be put off by this sort of stuff, so remember, formatting counts ...

Hey there cold, I'm here pulling a Bogalicious and reviewing this;) I must say, this piece of, apparently, action-adventure, was quite deep and poetic in an unexpected and innovative way. ...

Hey there vanillla, Ita here to review. The sound of water dripping had woken Rancet from her restless sleep, complete with all the nightmares the past had brought to her. ...

Hi there Chelsea! Ita here to review. (on a side note, I really like your username and avatar). So let me start off by saying I liked this quite a ...

*cracks rusty joints* Well hey there sylver, it's been a while since I've reviewed something, so here I am again. At first I didn't notice the chapter was titled 'Those ...

Hey there adel, Ita here to review, as promised. So, right off the bat, the format of this needs to be modified. Try leaving a space between each paragraph, and ...

Yo Pix. I've been following this with interest, so here I am to review. Now, as reason pointed out, the fact that Molly is no more and forgotten is a ...

Hey there, monster, here to review as promised. I would like to make many a point, pertaining only to one thing. As I go on, these things will probably be ...

Hey there, Pix, Ita here to review. As Reason stated, I haven't kept up with the previous chapters save the last one, however, I was expecting - as Reason said, ...

Hey there Pix, Ita here to review the famed tales of Molly and Rayah. How fun. I haven't read the other chapters, but based on the fact these are pretty ...

Hey there, Ita here to review. Let's begin. Heart is jumping through my chest. Mad red flames licking at the sky. Black sky, no moon in the black. I look ...

Hey there cinomin, Ita here to review. I'll be doing this as I read, so bear with me. First paragraph. I parked in the desolate parking lot for Summerwood Forest, ...

Hey there Braden, Ita here to review. I'm glad to see you added your first chapter to this. Now some more things are clear to me, especially the powers thing. ...

Hey there Jas, Ita here to review. Firstly, opening line. the sky is grey with rain and i have learned many things at my cushy office job. The 't' at ...