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I think this would be much more effective if you were to include some originality in your diction and phrasing. This is very plain, very basic, and well, to be ...

From what I've read, this seems an experiment for you. I commend you for trying it out. I'm not a fan of rhyming to be quite honest. While I think ...

Hi there. I think this is pretty well done, and I have little to say about it in general but here we are. Lessen your use of "shadows", the word ...

Okay. Specify. Make this personal. This sounds like a very generic lament, somewhat awkwardly phrased at times, and I really think it has the potential to be more. Towards the ...

Nice emotion. I would suggest trying to even out your voice a bit in your writing because, as the first reviewer mentioned, this kind of seems to go in between ...

Is this a poem? Or a story? Or nonsense? You need to get this straight. You're trying to throw these ridiculous and overloaded emotions at your reader without developing any ...

Alrighty. So, Kyll, seeing that you asked me for this review I'm not going to hold back all that much. I didn't like this. I saw this before, decided not ...

Alrighty. So. First off, I'm not a fan of rhyming schemes. Nor am I, to be frank, of this poem. This poem is all rhyming scheme, no poetry. You try ...

Why'd you post this? If you aren't going to take the time to capitalize, reread, spellcheck, or care in the slightest about your work I don't understand why you would ...

I appreciate and understand the sentiment of this poem. However, its delivery can definitely use some work. In particular: the flow, the diction, the tone, and the imagery. The flow ...

I'm skeptical when it comes to rhyming poetry, primarily because of poems like this. This isn't structured properly. Rhyming poetry is incredibly difficult to pull off because if you want ...

This isn't a review. Sorry. This is me more talking about your style in general, because well, I've been trying to organize my thoughts about it for a while. You ...

Reviewtiem, love. So you already know most of my quick thoughts about this, but there are a couple of things I want to stress about this piece in case you ...

Hi there :) So--quick review, because to be perfectly honest, I don't have much to say. I think that the first and last were my favorites as they just tended ...

Hi there! So, I too suffer from the occasional insomnia, and I must agree, it is quite frustrating. However, I found this poem quite frustrating at parts too. You have ...