Butterfinger

Don't be nervous! You'll get the hang of it! She drips down like a candle, Hot with thoughts she can't handle. She's with her crayons but she's nobody's box. Interesting ...

It's amazing when you write off a specific topic such as this. There are so many things that a single person dislikes and I found it funny that I hate ...

I clicked on this poem because I'd never thought about writing about a chair before. Curiosity got the better of me and this was really interesting! I wouldn't have made ...

Wow...this is the kind of poem that puts a burning picture in my head and I have to read it till the end. I love how you repeat Innocence throughout ...

Feet meet feet Interesting phrase....made me smile :) where hearts met pavement. Not sure what your going for, I imagine a bloody heart slatting to the ground...that's just me :) ...

Ok, here's my take on what Incognito had to say-not that I'm bashing you, but not all poetry has a strict form, rules that MUST be followed. It also doesn't ...

Grasp it tightly! Run your hand up and down the stem. Again and again, The blood will flow: The thorns will prick you, one by one, And you will bleed ...

If I could, I'd be a snowflake so light-weight and free carried on the whims of the wind If I could, I'd be a snowflake each one individual but with ...

I have to say that for the longest time of my teenage life, this is how I felt. Exactly. and when it felt too much, I would sit and scribble ...

From the start, this poem has a strong emotion to it, kind of an edge of your seat, what's gonna happen next feeling that gripped me till the end. I ...

I had to re-read this poem a couple times to connect the dots between it and the title, but now I see....sort of :) Like the emptiness that comes with ...

This is definitely a good start toward a poem. Anything written has the potential to be poetry, it all depends on how you work with it, mold it and shape ...

This is the kind of poem that hooks me from the start. From the very first line I was curious what would happen next. Poetry isn't always doesn't have the ...

Hey Waterlilygirl! This poem stuck out to me in a couple of different ways....the title struck me from past memories and I had to read what you wrote....I picked these ...

Your poem really hit me because it has personal feelings and experiences behind it to make it more tangible. It seems so real, almost like we're watching it play out ...