Published December 16, 2010
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I really like this because I like the way it relates to me (and I guess to other people too) and the fact that we all have our comfort zones. The repetition of "this place" shows the reader that you do not like the place you are in, since it is not where you are comfortable.
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I like your style of poetry, I've never quite seen anything like it before. Keep it up
I clicked on this poem because I'd never thought about writing about a chair before. Curiosity got the better of me and this was really interesting! I wouldn't have made a connection with a chair, but then there are tons of things on that list. It kind of feels like a story or prose more than a poem, but it's yours! and it is what you make it! Keep writing!