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  • Script » Realistic, Culture Re: Personality rant

    Jack here for a review. I like what you have got here, it really raises good points, and questions the whole education system, and you do it really well. Everyone ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Heaven's Angel, Hell's Rebel.

    Wow. That was really oddly cool. It was confusing but it was great. It felt to me like a love story, but then it didn't, I didn't really get what ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Letting You Go

    Jack here for a review. Ok firstly I really enjoyed reading this, it was heart warming, and saddening at the same time. It was very interesting, I really could feel ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Pro is a con.

    Jack here for a quick review. When I clicked on this I didn't expect this, it was though a very normal topic. There are a lot of poems of relationships ...

    Nov 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love Forever

    jack here for a quick review. This is one of the first poems I have ever read that is about love, marriage etc. But I really enjoyed it, it was ...

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Phantoms

    Jack here fro a review. That was a very interesting poem, I don't know where I stand with it, but I did enjoy it. There was some good lines in ...

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Um

    Jack here for a review, don't know why though. :) That just but smile on my face, I don't know why but it just did. I just got to say ...

    Nov 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mountain, Hare Funeral

    Jack here for a quick review. Give me a break if I am wrong, I suck at poetry! :) That was full of amazing description, it was like re reading ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Queen of the Lilies

    Jack here for a review, though I am not great at poetry, give me a chance I am slowly learning :) Ok to start of I love your title, that ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mom

    Jack here for a quick review. I am not the best at telling what good poetry is, but this was great! It had emotion and it was really sweet. You ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Karuit's misson

    Jack here for a quick review. Firstly I like your idea, but I can not stress enough! split it all up. It is so daunting coming along and seeing this. ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Project: LOVE [Chapter 9 - Edited]

    Jack here for the promised review! Ok before I start I just got to say, next time hurry up with your writing, you left me hanging:) (joking)!!! I Like the ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fire and Ice

    Jack here for a short review. For your first non school poem this is great! I hate doing poems for school and don't but effort in as much. And as ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: And All That Was Left...

    Jack here for a short review You said you wanted this to be a journal entry, well personally it should be story. I am going to look at this as ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Over the Horizon ~ Chapter 1

    Jack here for a quick review!! There have been a few books about the first fleet, but I personally have never read any of them. You writing still is fun, ...

    Nov 18, 2014


Be steadfast as a tower that doth not bend its stately summit to the tempest’s shock.
— Dante Alighieri