BrokenSkye

Hey there! My name is Skye and I thought I would give you a step by step review! First things first, the first letter of each word in your title ...

Hey! My name is Skye and I will be reviewing your piece tonight! First off, I love how you said that you thought it was someone else's song just to ...

Alright, my name is Skye and I will be reviewing your piece tonight! Without reading it first, I noticed it's length and your punctuation. Both are very good, as long ...

Okay first off I would like to introduce myself, I am Skye and I will be reviewing your piece today! I want to start off by saying that it is ...

Hello! I am here to give you a review! First things first, I would like to say that your title really drew me into wanting to read this piece. I ...

Hello Woaagilly! Since you don't have any reviews yet, looks like I am going to be the first one! First thing is first, love the title, and I love your ...

Hello Fizz! Looks like I am going to be your first reviewer on this piece! Alright, first things first, and it starts in the first stanza. You put the ' ...

Hey there Rosan! I remember reading your first post and now I am here to tell you how I felt about this one! Okay, first thing is first, I really ...

Alright, first thing is first, I found your first stanza to be interesting to be quite honest, but there is one flaw, the third and fourth lines can be improved ...

Okay, first thing, right off the bat I notice that there is no capitalization or punctuation. Now, I am not sure whether or not you meant for this as a ...

Well, first things first, very nice! I love your rhyming, and how you carried it through out your whole poem instead of just one stanza (really getting tired of those). ...

Okay, right off the bat, there is punctuation, but no capitals. First stanza was super cute! I loved it! But, in the second stanza you confuse me with the whole ...

Looks like I am the only one still reviewing... That kind of worries me, considering they are missing out on some of the most amazing work. Like this one for ...

Wow. Very nice, I love how you used the words "crucified" and "bard". They aren't used often, and even when they are, it is out of context. I did see ...

This is amazing! I don't see anything really wrong with it. Your rhyming was spot on. Your grammar, punctuation, and spelling is all perfect. There is a story, hidden behind ...