Boolovesyou

Hey Host! Just a short review here! Your lines are forced. Bit choppy as well. Thats all though. PM me or post on my wall if you have any questions! ...

Hey Tgirly, I really liked your poem. It reminds me of this book I read where this girl wrote letters to her future husband. Nicely done! PM me or post ...

Hey Chosenofair! I really like your poem. It was interesting and I could tell you really thought about it. Well, it seems so anyway. Your words were really beautiful. Good ...

Hey, just a quick review here! When you started your stanzas you used the same words over again, and used 'but' too much! Thats all! - Boo

Short enough to be intresting, long enough to cover everything. Good job with the skirt rule!

I like it and it has some emotion. I think pretty much every one can relate to it. ( If they cant maybe they should put more of them self ...

I really liked it. Your very good writer, so don't stop. It was confusing, but deep. It gave me a lot to think about!

I love it! Its got emotion, and history. It set up the end well. It has a good beginning and end! Good Job!

I like the point of the poem, but it is kind of bland. I only noticed one mistake however, With friends and with enemies life feels kinda tough. Kinda should ...

The name suggest a very stalker like poem. xD I liked it though.

Oh I forgot! Sorry About the only think in this world, think should be thing.

I liked it, but it felt like a child's book. Its needs more meat to be a poem.

These are definiatly intresting, and have intrested me in the form of the poem you were writing. I think your words may need a little more work.

This isn't that creative. Its not rhymed or special. Honestly it needs a lot of work...

Its intriguing and it grabs you. A would add more details, but not to the lines you have. Add more. I personally say don't scrap it. I like it.