BookWolf

Hello, Snazzy! I'm here for a review! :D So, right now I am seriously dying to know who toddler is in the picture. Is it Rose?! Is it Mrs. Ranker?! ...

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Wow, that's pretty good. :D Its short, but I think that it works very well for this poem. I like how you smoothly wrapped up the ending, especially the last ...

Wow! :D This is SO much better than the Prolouge. Not that Prolouge was bad, its just that this one is so good. You're ability to describe things is just ...

I love the way you made the words rhyme! :D This is really great, you expressed the emotion in the poem beautifully. My favorite part is, How you could smile, ...

But... But... :( I liked Drina.... Why ambeezy? WHY?! D: I was seriously touched by Nadia's reaction to her aunt's death. And again, your description is perfect. Your character's emotions ...

Ooo :D There is obviously something going on here. A talking photo?! That's pretty cool, and I think you described Rose's reaction very well. This is rather short, especially compared ...

Alrighty, so I'm going to review this again because I read that you had rewritten it, along with your 5th chapter. This one is MUCH better than the old one! ...

Nice! :D I found this story quite interesting. Your description is AMAZING and I like your writing style. I found a few mistakes though. Just inside the main entrance to ...

This was really great. :D A little short, but great. I would suggest though, rewording the first sentence. It seems very awkward to me and doesn't sound the same as ...

Wow! :D That was a really great start of something I would like to read more of. I'm loving your writing style, and I admire how you're able to create ...

I found this story very interesting! :D You have a great storyline going and your writing style is pretty good. I loved it when she entered the mirror and found ...

This is really amazing and I can obviously tell that you put great emotion into this poem. Its very touching, yet dark at the same time. I really enjoyed reading ...

This was seriously brilliant. :D And so funny once I figured out what was happening. A few of your lines are quite awkward and confusing, but the rest really made ...

Oh wow...