BookWolf

That was awesome! Simply Brilliant! I would love to find out what happens next, tell me when you continue. And as for a name suggestion, I think maybe you could ...

This poem described it perfectly! I couldn't find one thing you forgot about a rodeo (Not that I know very much about rodeos). But I did notice a lack of ...

Interesting story and pretty good description. Just gonna point out a few things. "Liam Liam look it i found the bufferfly" Liam looks at his little sister who is carefully ...

This was a good try at writing! I'm just gonna point out some mistakes. '"Audre!" linda yelled from the kitchen

Well, I suppose this... poem? Short Story?... was rather cool and interesting. But, I have to ask, do you know what a capital letter is? I don't remember even seeing ...

This is really good. :) The name is what attracted me to this story, and I'm glad it did. You have really good detail and I can picture exactly what ...

An excellent start for a story. I can totally see this becoming something great. But I felt that when your character left it was very abrupt and just left me ...

I found this poem quite enchanting. It explains the reality of the world and shows it in comparison to the wonders of a fantasy world. I normally don't like poems ...

Despite how short it is, it is rather enjoyable to read. But I must point out something. You put 'She knew I was hurting though." Which was fine, but right ...

This is a really great story! :) I felt like each word painted a perfect picture in my mind. Your fight scene was a lot better than some I've read. ...

I like your writing style, don't change it! Sure, you could add in a few harder words, but keep it pretty much the same. I think that the writing style ...

Hi, that was awesome! You are obviously a skilled writer and have a passion for what you write about. You seem to have already formed your own style of writing ...

I love the way you made it sound so innocent and magical. Its truly a tale about a young girl, lost in her imagination and going off into amazing and ...

Um, alright. :D At first I thought they were friends, considering that the fox was annoyed with the bird coming to talk to her. Because normally that's how a story ...

Hi, I'm BookWolf! I found this short story to be pretty cool. I've always liked stories with girls dressing up as men because women weren't aloud to do something. To ...