Blackwood

The content and descriptions in this poem are great. One thing I think needs some improvement is the format, rhythm. I read the first four lines. They established a good ...

What you have here are really great lyrics. very inspiring and uplifting. However i consider this incomplete. All you have a chorus and verse (?) at the beginning. You need ...

Ok I am going to give you a quick review. I might be a little blatant so don't take it personally. Cutting straight to the point I think there are ...

This poem is nice and humourous which some us writers can relate to. One thing that bothers me is your strange and inconsistent rhyming. In the first verse you rhyme ...

Looking past the formatting; This poem has extremely dire but marvelous descriptive language which both works and needs work. Some of them richly describe a moment in intensity while others ...

This was really great! Very descriptive. Lovely similes and metaphors. It worked really well, i really got a feeling and sense of a storm from it. It was, I suppose ...

I see this as more of an opinion piece. If it is an essay then you need to develop your argument a bit more powerfully. However as a stand alone ...

Hey, this may be a short review because my internet is being a pain. Firstly capitalize all your 'i's , it looks bad in lowercase. I found the stanza in ...

This is a very good poem. I really liked it very much. A few sentences I think have too many syllables which makes it a little bit of a mouthful ...

This poem was very good. I read it as a metaphor which could represent a few things. When I read it I thought of both birds and ships. One thing ...

Nice poem, watch out for your grammar is places, for example "why have your wings" not has. Also some other grammar errors such as 'looks' instead of 'look'. Good job, ...

This poem was very nice. It is ultimately a very nice extended metaphor. Just a few lines i feel lack rhythm. For example. "And some have colorful designs" is very ...

First thing first, this doesn't seem like a short story, but if you intended on us reading this at first there are a few things to take note of. Firstly, ...

This poem is rich in words abd has an excellent rhyming scheme. You did extremely well with your use in words and I like how each line is poetic within ...

It is hard to review an essay, since I am no English teacher. The essay was a good length and not too boring to read. You conveyed your ideas nicely. ...