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Re: Desire
Hey, Bitter here! Let's get started! Meh. 2/5. it sounds like your trying to be too fancy with it, and the last stanza is so hard to understand. I think ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: Here there be Darkness :1:
Hey there! Bitter here for a review. Let's get started. This is actually the best thing I've read on this website in awhile. You have good continuity, very correct grammar ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Hey there! Bitter here for a review! Let's get started! I actually really love this. However there were some slight issues, and because this prologue is so short, I'm just ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: To Love a Killer
Hey there Bitter here for a review! Let's get down to business! Now this poem is pretty long, and I tend to do long reviews. So, please keep in mind ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: ...
Hey! Bitter here for a review. It's the first review I've done in awhile, so let's get started. Damn, I like this. At first I didn't like it, and I ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: Face Scratch
Hey there!! Bitter here to give you a review! Let's get started! I really like this poem. It's a bit vague, but I love the format. The only citicism I ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: The Average Week of an Average Girl
Hey there!! BitterRosemary here for a review. Let's get started!! Okay, I really, really love this. I have a few nitpicks, however, so bear with me. At the beginning of ...
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend
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Apr 16, 2014
Apparently this is too long for a review response, so it's posted as review: Blackwood. Scroll to the bottom of this page and look for my review. Did I sugarcoat ... -
Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend
HEY! BitterRosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started! Okay. What? This was immensely confusing. Entertaining, but weird. Um, too many grammatical errors to count, so here's the ...
Apr 15, 2014 -
Re: It Was My Love...! It Is My Life……
Hey BitterRosemary here for a review. Let's get started. Okay. This is interesting. But not great, sorry. The punctuation and grammar is way off, which throws off the reader more ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Threadbare
Hey! Bitter rosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started. I actually love this poem. ZERO GRAMMATICAL ERRORS! WHOHOO! GO YOU! (thats right party you grammar nazis) I ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: At the sideline
Hey there! BitterRosemary for a review! Let's get started. I'll keep this brief. This is very good, a nice, unexpected twist at the end there, I like that. I definietely ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: The Galaxies On My Skin
HFRHGUAHGABHFA0GFB I HAVE NO WORDS DIGIAUGLGADGBPAGFIJG BEAUTIFUL AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH okay now that that's over with! Hey! BitterRosemary here to give you a review~! Let's get started! Let me start by say
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: The Rose
Hey there! Bitter here to give you a review! Let's get started!!!! First things first! WELCOME TO YWS!!!Barely four days old you are (excuse my Yoda speak). Next, on a ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: A Ripple Effect
Hey there! Bitter here to give you a review let's get started!!! To be honest, this poem is kind of intimidating! The tiny font that you used, whether intention or ...
Apr 3, 2014
