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BitterRosemary

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Desire

    Hey, Bitter here! Let's get started! Meh. 2/5. it sounds like your trying to be too fancy with it, and the last stanza is so hard to understand. I think ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Here there be Darkness :1:

    Hey there! Bitter here for a review. Let's get started. This is actually the best thing I've read on this website in awhile. You have good continuity, very correct grammar ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Prologue

    Hey there! Bitter here for a review! Let's get started! I actually really love this. However there were some slight issues, and because this prologue is so short, I'm just ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: To Love a Killer

    Hey there Bitter here for a review! Let's get down to business! Now this poem is pretty long, and I tend to do long reviews. So, please keep in mind ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    Hey! Bitter here for a review. It's the first review I've done in awhile, so let's get started. Damn, I like this. At first I didn't like it, and I ...

    Oct 23, 2014
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Face Scratch

    Hey there!! Bitter here to give you a review! Let's get started! I really like this poem. It's a bit vague, but I love the format. The only citicism I ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Average Week of an Average Girl

    Hey there!! BitterRosemary here for a review. Let's get started!! Okay, I really, really love this. I have a few nitpicks, however, so bear with me. At the beginning of ...

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend

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    Apparently this is too long for a review response, so it's posted as review: Blackwood. Scroll to the bottom of this page and look for my review. Did I sugarcoat ...

    Apr 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend

    HEY! BitterRosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started! Okay. What? This was immensely confusing. Entertaining, but weird. Um, too many grammatical errors to count, so here's the ...

    Apr 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: It Was My Love...! It Is My Life……

    Hey BitterRosemary here for a review. Let's get started. Okay. This is interesting. But not great, sorry. The punctuation and grammar is way off, which throws off the reader more ...

    Apr 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Threadbare

    Hey! Bitter rosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started. I actually love this poem. ZERO GRAMMATICAL ERRORS! WHOHOO! GO YOU! (thats right party you grammar nazis) I ...

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: At the sideline

    Hey there! BitterRosemary for a review! Let's get started. I'll keep this brief. This is very good, a nice, unexpected twist at the end there, I like that. I definietely ...

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: The Galaxies On My Skin

    HFRHGUAHGABHFA0GFB I HAVE NO WORDS DIGIAUGLGADGBPAGFIJG BEAUTIFUL AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH okay now that that's over with! Hey! BitterRosemary here to give you a review~! Let's get started! Let me start by say

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The Rose

    Hey there! Bitter here to give you a review! Let's get started!!!! First things first! WELCOME TO YWS!!!Barely four days old you are (excuse my Yoda speak). Next, on a ...

    Apr 3, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, Other Re: A Ripple Effect

    Hey there! Bitter here to give you a review let's get started!!! To be honest, this poem is kind of intimidating! The tiny font that you used, whether intention or ...

    Apr 3, 2014


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