Biluata

Hello there Sylar! This is Luata here for a review! This is a very heartfelt piece, so please, only take my suggestions with a grain of salt! The poem itself ...

Hello there Lettersnumbersonly, Luata here for a review. First off, I must say, woah. That was not what I was expecting at all based on the title and it was ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! I am in school, so I apologize if I begin to ramble, plenty of distractions surrounded by other *whispers* irritating students. Anyway, unlike ...

Hello there! Biluata here for a review. I can see why your username is MrsxCreepypasta, I mean, geez. I will do my best for a review. Admittedly, short story/flash fictions ...

Hello there! Biluata here for a review. Admittedly, I haven't reviewed poetry in a while so I am a bit rusty, so I apologize in advance for rambling and/or nitpicking. ...

Hello there PenguinAttack! Biluata here for a review, but you can call me Luata for short. I don't remember if I've done any review for you before, but yeah. Anyway, ...

Hey there! Luata here for a review. I appreciate the meaning that you are trying to say in this poem but I feel like you use a little to much ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review. I'm a tad bit rusty on my novel reviewing skills *dramatically cracks knuckles* but I'll take a stab at this one. Sorry if ...

Hello there! Biluata here for a review. I only have one grammar item of which to tell you and that is commas! You use periods and question marks so you ...

Hi there, Luata here for a review! Honestly, I know how you feel! It's the second day of high school here and to be quite honest, I am so overwhelmed! ...

Hi there! Luata here for a review! I hope that you don't mind this review, I try not to be to nitpicky, but I do end up doing that sometimes! ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! I haven't done this in a while, so I'm a little rusty, but I'll do the best that I can! Since I am ...

Hello there! Luata for the first review I have done in months, since I hope to be a little more active on YWS. I think that you have a good ...

'Lo BeanBird! Lovely to review your work one more. At least, I do believe that I have reviewed your work before not entirely sure. The first thing I'm gonna say ...

Hello there! Biluata here for a review. Before we star i want to apologize; I'm using a phone for this and I hate the phone keyboard so spacing and spelling ...