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Re: The owl
I did not expect the owl to feel sorry, but I think I understand why he was doing all that he had to do for survival. I imagine if I ...
Jul 10, 2021 -
Re: Life's Dance
This is a very heartfelt story that really touched me, deeply. The protagonist reminices about her beloved who has been lost by war, a very tragic end. I loved how ...
Nov 13, 2020 -
Re: Friends with a monster
It was a very nice poem and I quite liked the dark humor. I loved how you described the alien "Bulbous nose, with a similarly out of place mouth, Many ...
Nov 13, 2020 -
Re: Ad Astra
Hello, I am here to review the poem. I find the theme of the poem to be lovely and the name to be a fitting one. I loved how you ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter One) [Revamped]
Hello. I am here to review the fanfic. I believe it is a very interesting chapter and Joker is in character too, he just enjoys the crazyness and everyone's misery. ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: a thinly-veiled allegory
I love this poem it's so full of satirical goodness. I love how it begins to because it transports the reader right into the story. I love how you say ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: mistakes counted like currency
Hello. I am here to review the poem. I liked how you conveyed the struggle of writing. It feels very fresh and very, very relatable. I like how you present ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: fear of heights
Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very interesting one. First you explain the meaning of vertigo, or better said, your feeling about the word. In ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: I have seen...
Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very beautiful one, in my opinion. I like how you began the poem, with the rarity of "hearing the ...
Jul 30, 2020 -
Re: a raw self-reflection about self-reflection
Hello, I am here to comment on your self-reflection on self-reflection. To be truthful this work made me reflect on how much time I spend like a zombie in front ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: All the Love in the World
Hello. I'm here to review the song. I like it, I love the rhyme and the way the lyrics flow. The story behind the song is interesting too, about a ...
Jul 28, 2020 -
Re: Mine Friend
Hello, I am here to review this poem. I liked the devotion between the friends mentioned in the poem. I believe a good friend with a boundless patience is an ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: footprints in the sky
Hello, I am here to review this poem which I liked very much. I like how you started saying you "held the sky i your hands and tore it to ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: Modern Girl
Hello. I am here to review. I believe this poem is very on point with some modern girls in the fact that we want to be dressed beautifully and shine ...
Jul 15, 2020 -
Re: Numb
Hello, this is an interesting poem that can be also very relatable. I wonder why the narrator feels numb to the point of despair and I also wish that I ...
Jul 10, 2020
