User avatar

Beautifulsparkle

  • Art » Other, Dramatic Re: The owl

    I did not expect the owl to feel sorry, but I think I understand why he was doing all that he had to do for survival. I imagine if I ...

    Jul 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Life's Dance

    This is a very heartfelt story that really touched me, deeply. The protagonist reminices about her beloved who has been lost by war, a very tragic end. I loved how ...

    Nov 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Friends with a monster

    It was a very nice poem and I quite liked the dark humor. I loved how you described the alien "Bulbous nose, with a similarly out of place mouth, Many ...

    Nov 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ad Astra

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. I find the theme of the poem to be lovely and the name to be a fitting one. I loved how you ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter One) [Revamped]

    Hello. I am here to review the fanfic. I believe it is a very interesting chapter and Joker is in character too, he just enjoys the crazyness and everyone's misery. ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: a thinly-veiled allegory

    I love this poem it's so full of satirical goodness. I love how it begins to because it transports the reader right into the story. I love how you say ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: mistakes counted like currency

    Hello. I am here to review the poem. I liked how you conveyed the struggle of writing. It feels very fresh and very, very relatable. I like how you present ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: fear of heights

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very interesting one. First you explain the meaning of vertigo, or better said, your feeling about the word. In ...

    Jul 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I have seen...

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very beautiful one, in my opinion. I like how you began the poem, with the rarity of "hearing the ...

    Jul 30, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: a raw self-reflection about self-reflection

    Hello, I am here to comment on your self-reflection on self-reflection. To be truthful this work made me reflect on how much time I spend like a zombie in front ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: All the Love in the World

    Hello. I'm here to review the song. I like it, I love the rhyme and the way the lyrics flow. The story behind the song is interesting too, about a ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Mine Friend

    Hello, I am here to review this poem. I liked the devotion between the friends mentioned in the poem. I believe a good friend with a boundless patience is an ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: footprints in the sky

    Hello, I am here to review this poem which I liked very much. I like how you started saying you "held the sky i your hands and tore it to ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Modern Girl

    Hello. I am here to review. I believe this poem is very on point with some modern girls in the fact that we want to be dressed beautifully and shine ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Numb

    Hello, this is an interesting poem that can be also very relatable. I wonder why the narrator feels numb to the point of despair and I also wish that I ...

    Jul 10, 2020


'The Answer to the Great Question... Of Life, the Universe and Everything... Is... Forty-two,' said Deep Thought, with infinite majesty and calm.
— Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy