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Beautifulsparkle

  • Art » Other, Dramatic Re: The owl

    I did not expect the owl to feel sorry, but I think I understand why he was doing all that he had to do for survival. I imagine if I ...

    Jul 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Life's Dance

    This is a very heartfelt story that really touched me, deeply. The protagonist reminices about her beloved who has been lost by war, a very tragic end. I loved how ...

    Nov 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Friends with a monster

    It was a very nice poem and I quite liked the dark humor. I loved how you described the alien "Bulbous nose, with a similarly out of place mouth, Many ...

    Nov 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ad Astra

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. I find the theme of the poem to be lovely and the name to be a fitting one. I loved how you ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Gotham v. Joker, 1894 (Chapter One) [Revamped]

    Hello. I am here to review the fanfic. I believe it is a very interesting chapter and Joker is in character too, he just enjoys the crazyness and everyone's misery. ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: a thinly-veiled allegory

    I love this poem it's so full of satirical goodness. I love how it begins to because it transports the reader right into the story. I love how you say ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: mistakes counted like currency

    Hello. I am here to review the poem. I liked how you conveyed the struggle of writing. It feels very fresh and very, very relatable. I like how you present ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: fear of heights

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very interesting one. First you explain the meaning of vertigo, or better said, your feeling about the word. In ...

    Jul 30, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I have seen...

    Hello, I am here to review the poem. It is a very beautiful one, in my opinion. I like how you began the poem, with the rarity of "hearing the ...

    Jul 30, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: a raw self-reflection about self-reflection

    Hello, I am here to comment on your self-reflection on self-reflection. To be truthful this work made me reflect on how much time I spend like a zombie in front ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: All the Love in the World

    Hello. I'm here to review the song. I like it, I love the rhyme and the way the lyrics flow. The story behind the song is interesting too, about a ...

    Jul 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Mine Friend

    Hello, I am here to review this poem. I liked the devotion between the friends mentioned in the poem. I believe a good friend with a boundless patience is an ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: footprints in the sky

    Hello, I am here to review this poem which I liked very much. I like how you started saying you "held the sky i your hands and tore it to ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Modern Girl

    Hello. I am here to review. I believe this poem is very on point with some modern girls in the fact that we want to be dressed beautifully and shine ...

    Jul 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Numb

    Hello, this is an interesting poem that can be also very relatable. I wonder why the narrator feels numb to the point of despair and I also wish that I ...

    Jul 10, 2020


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind