Augustus

Hey! Augustus here for the review. Let me just start by saying that, I absolutely loved the pattern of your poem. Although, it was hard to follow near the end, ...

Heyo! Augustus here for the review. First off, this poem felt very honest. Use of simple words made it easy to understand but personally I prefer to have some challenge ...

Heya! Augustus here. Well, First of all I really liked this work of yours. I enjoyed what you did with the... the 'symmetry' thingy. :) Start was very clean and ...

Heya! Augustus here. Just like previous reviewer, I also noticed few spelling and grammatical errors here and there. I'll try to give an honest review and will try to be ...

Heya! Augustus here. Well, I really liked your poem and even if there are three reviews on it already, I still want to review it. What I really liked about ...

Heya! Augustus here. Well, first off I really liked the idea. As it was supposed to be a lyrical poem, I read it out loud. I felt like there's some ...

Heya! Augustus here. Well, this piece of yours truly deserves to become a story. I liked the simple style of your writing but you know at some places it went ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Well, this story was kind of cute. A children story with a moral. Well done with the concept. However, I must say you could ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Well, this is a very creepy and interesting piece of work. I like the way you have handled the whole situation. Maybe, you could ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Well, I really liked your poem. There is lot of imaginary, but there is still room for some more. And one thing that I ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Well, Its a good piece of work. But, I must say the concept was slightly weak. And, you could add more imaginary to your ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review (not sure, though) Well, It's a very cute piece of work by you. About the grammar and technical stuff, I think I shouldn't even ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Well, its an interesting piece of work. I have read many poems with different kinds of comparisons but this piece was kinda unique. I ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. First of all, welcome to YWS. So, I am going to review this poem in two parts: Pros: I like the theme of your ...

Heya! Augustus here for the review. Firstly, I like the pattern as well as meaning of your 'poem'. I just loved the trick you have done with last two lines ...