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Sagitta, :c I want some ramen. *points to your avvie* gimme, gimme, gimme! I like this poem, I like the voice of it - it's contemplative, so it goes very ...

Hello Alice! :) So much lovely poetry coming from you. I'm seeing a trend of sugar and sweetness, is this a series you're doing? Well, on to this poem specifically. ...

Tophats, First and foremost I love the pitch. The idea and inspiration for this is gold and relatable. Who doesn't have battles with themselves in front of a mirror? I ...

Jedd, There is humor in this and I appreciate that and I also kind of like how "riddle-y" it sounds, it's got a voice of it's own and there's charm ...

Hey Variks, Yes, there is a lot of anger in this poem, but not anger in me after reading it. This is a critical moment for a poet: do we ...

Hey Kaila! I really think you have a powerful sentiment in this poem, describing that hurt and powerful emotion of longing and trying and dreams falling short. The ending really ...

Hey Taha, Maybe you can put a spoiler at the end with your questions? Since you numbered the haikus it would be easy to refer to each one. As a ...

JustOneMorePoem, ;) I love your username. Nicely done. This poem does a great job in elevating that symbolic locket, your flow is pretty and your voice believable. I hear the ...

Fangirl! The poem has a great message and sentiment driving it, it is hopeful and motivational and there are not enough happy poems around, eh? I love that about this, ...

Shauzer, Your rhymes are not in-your-face, your flow takes me from the first line to the last, and the voice of it kind of makes me chuckle for its dramatics. ...

Meerkat, I get the sense that the end of the poem implies a death or an abrupt end to the speaker, no? I like the sudden turn and implications for ...

Catlover, When we engage with puzzles, we're stirring up a box brimming with thousands of little pieces, a complex mess of what's supposed to be whole and it's jumbled up ...

I dig the poem Elysium, though... I'm a little torn. This poem wants to be casual, whisper-tones so the simplicity and straight forwardness works, and all the better because the ...

Tgirly, Philosophical poems focused on ideas are really difficult to write well. They tend to be lofty, too caught-up in its own ideas to really say anything. What I like ...

Drfeelgood, We're being taken to unusual places here. A personified shock-absorb-er is such a rich idea. I'm a partly biased reviewer when it comes to rhyme, so take what I ...