Audy

Hey Lindsay! I'm Audy and I'm here to review, so I'm just going to dive right into this piece. Now, I just want to say that I love experimental pieces, ...

Hey Achu Normally I like experimental poetry, but I'm not a fan of the bolding words. Through careful line breaks and placement of words, you should be able to add ...

Hey there Emmylou! This is a really interesting poem, I got that it was more of a portrait-esque type poem describing and portraying a character and the speaker's emotions toward ...

Hey Phoenixrain! I'm Audy, it's good to meet you. I'm just going to dive right in, because that first line really drives you forward into it with a running start, ...

Hey Storyweaver! I'm always excited when I come across one of your poems, because you never disappoint. Your pieces always seem to hint at a higher societal meaning/impact, and there's ...

Hey Saterdays! I love the title of the piece and I like the concept behind it, young love is always a large field in the poetic world, so it's difficult ...

Hey Scandalous! Beautiful poem you have here! The bold was sort of bothersome at first, but I'm assuming it's probably some kind of formatting error, right? So, no big deal. ...

Hey Pumpkincat! Interesting poem you've got here. It's apparent to me that there's a youthful hope throughout the piece and a desire to want to change and fix the broken ...

Hey KoraHarper! I see you're relatively new to YWS, I just want to say welcome to the site and I'm glad to see some of your poetry :) One suggestion ...

Hey HHemayed! I love the progression of this piece to one of doubt and questions and then later it turns and it's an expression of hope and perseverance C: The ...

Hey Abid! I'm Audy and I'm gonna be your reviewer today, so let's just dive right in, shall we? My first impression of this is that it's got some nice ...

Hey Gee! You have a lyrical style in all of your poetry that is very expressive of whatever tone it is you're trying to achieve. The title immediately drew me ...

Hey Umaima, What a great and dramatic narrative piece C: I actually applaud you in the voice and the solemn tone that is maintained throughout. The one thing that I ...

Hey Nike! I really love the casual atmosphere that is evoked, also I think it's an interesting set-up with Cody who works at the bar and this girl seems charismatic/personality, ...

Hey Indie, I absolutely love the voice and the earnestness in your piece -- I think I might say that about all of your pieces though? It's something very consistent ...