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Hi Nepthys, I love what you have here. Zombies and steam punk? What more could you ask for? One problem though. This isn't a story. There is a beginning, and ...

Hello Mailani! Poetry reviewing isn't exactly my forte, but I'll give it a try. This was my favorite kind of poem. The kind that is difficult to understand at first, ...

Hello! Me again. I hope I don't come across as a stalker, what with all the reviews on your stuff. I just really like reviewing screenplays, which you write a ...

Hi EscapeToNeverland, If I was a moth, the words "Short Story: Fantasy, Science Fiction" would be a flame. Of course I had to read your story, and I thought it ...

Hello dbrick, This poem made me smile. It stood out. That's the most important thing in writing, I believe. Good isn't enough, people have to notice what you wrote. Your ...

Hello! Huge shot in the dark here, do you like screenplays? :) Anyway, I liked your script. It's pretty short, so there's not too much to review on, but I'll ...

Hello fellow Fountain Pen. I'm currently looking for relatively old poems for last-minute reviewing. EIGHT MINUTES! Whoa. This is pretty deep, even for poetry. Poetry isn't exactly my forte, so ...

I can't be the only one singing, "What does the fox say." Anyway, I really liked your poem. In fact, I only found one real problem with it, in the ...

Someone's been reading a lot of Poe. This poem was really good. You were able to effectively freak me out. But other than the first few lines, it wasn't really… ...

I clicked on this for the same reason as Bloodink. It's gory, but I'm fascinated with innocent people being killed in history. Oh gosh, I'm a psychopath. Anywho... I noticed ...

This was really good. I see no spelling or grammatical errors, good job. Ok, so I realize that the story is suppose to be like this, but still, you might ...

Ok, here we go. First of all, congrats on writing a screenplay! They're pretty tough. I've tried a few times, but mine just didn't turn out right. So, as BunnyBot ...

Alright. Overall, I liked this story. Here's what I think. First of all, I like your title. Nice. Second, this sounds like the kind of thing that would be submitted ...

Wow. I loved this. You definitely have the right audience here, on a writing website ;). I'm afraid I don't have too much critique for you, because I see nothing ...

I really love the story you have here. However, I got very confused. I think you need to be a bit more specific with your pronouns. The most prominent example ...