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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Musings from a Music Festival

    As a sibling, I can confirm that it is truly one of the purest relationship there is. You aren't just a sibling. You're a role model, a second mother, a ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: burnished

    Someone who has lost all hope, yet still wants it. At least, that's my interpretation of it. They're looking back at all the good things that have happened, only to ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's Not Your Fault

    "Let’s talk instead of looking around." Many people, such as myself, don't want to talk about their problems. They're afraid of being overdramatic, or being ridiculed, or they simply don't ...

    Oct 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Poem "Existence"

    The message of this poem was sweet and simple. Enjoy life. People often forget to enjoy the small things in life. We go through life and try too hard to ...

    Oct 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Burn

    Queen Elizabeth died because of her makeup. Marie Curie died in the name of science while studying radiation. Both did great things, Queen Elizabeth was the first queen to rule ...

    Oct 11, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dark All Over; Walk in the Light

    We can't go searching for happiness, we can only find it exactly where we are. Too many people think that if they go looking for happiness, they will find it, ...

    Oct 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Hunger

    Your story reflects someone who has lost hope and part of their humanity. They are both physically and mentally withering away. They don't care about what has happened to their ...

    Oct 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Thirteen

    You've perfectly expressed feelings I've felt for years. Wanting to feel good enough, but at the same time knowing that you never will. Wanting to express how you feel, but ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Drawings (Extended)

    You've described how it feels to feel imperfect. Feeling like you have to "draw" on your body feels horrible, but at the same time, a sickening escape. You want to ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Autism

    This poem really hit home for me because my brother is autistic. You've really described what it's like for him. I hope when people read this poem, they realize what ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Never again

    A beautiful poem of redemption. Sometimes, when we've fallen so deep down a hole, we need help from others to get to. The problem is, we don't always know who ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: the inevitable

    We can't run away from our problems. When you run from your problems, all your doing is postponing the day they catch up with you. We all have to face ...

    Oct 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: eye of the storm

    I felt claustrophobic as I read this. Almost like a caged bird that longed to be free. A caged bird that waited day after day, week after week, month after ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Humor Re: What Would You Do?

    I honestly wasn't sure whether to be shocked or laugh when the creature first introduced themselves. I loved the plot twist near the end. I was honestly expecting for the ...

    Oct 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Butterfly Dark

    Children's imagination can bring light to the darkness. Just like the butterfly was light to Elia. Elia was able to live through the darkness of the world and become the ...

    Oct 1, 2021


The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
— Shakti Gawain