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Re: Scientificity of the Spiritual
Hi abelgaiya, here to review! Okay, so what I think a strong point about this piece was the length and pacing. now, that might sounds a bit weird considering I'm ...
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Re: Hallow
Hi there, skat! Here to review your song :D Okay, so I really thought that your main idea was pretty cool. I think a particular strong point this was your ...
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Re: So this is the end intro
Hi Ang, here to review :) I really liked your theme with this. It had a really good pace, you had varied sentences to stop it from becoming boring and ...
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Re: The Coming Storm
Hey, GoonerGirl! Here to review your story :) Wow. Beautiful! Seriously, your imagery is absolutely fantastic, a articular strong point of this piece. I love your use of metaphors, and ...
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Re: Oh World
Hiya Hsarver- here to review your lyrics! I think you have some really interesting ideas here, it was definitely a strong message here and I can really feel the emotion ...
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Re: Dark *Revised*
Hey singingwriter! I'm coming across a lot of your works today :) Anyways, what I liked about this was that it was really strong, and really had me on the ...
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Re: Phases of life
Hiya SalmanK, here to review! Well, this is certainly different to say the least. I wasn't really sure what message you were trying to put across, and with a piece ...
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Re: A Backwards World
Hiya Holysocks, here to review! So what I liked about this is it's quite an interesting idea. I've sort of heard something like this before, but you used some original ...
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Re: Lady Santa
Hiya Dreamy, here to review! Firstly, nitpicks: She is a smart, kind woman. And started to care less careless about everyone. Right, now you've got a nice idea here, but ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: How philosophy can turn anything upside down
Hey Hero! Here to review :D You have many very interesting thought provoking ideas in this essay which is really good. When talking about the unknown, there is basically and ...
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Re: The Ship of Doom
Hi Emma! Here to review your story. I thought the pacing of this piece was really good. The sentences were long/short when they needed to be and in the right ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: That's all she said
Hiya Amir, here to review this work! Okay, so I'm just going to ignore the grammatical errors of this and focus more on what exactly is going on. I think ...
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Re: Locked Up In This Cage Called My Life
Hi BrokenSkye! Here to review your lyrics this review day :) What I liked the most about this is the imagery you've created. Raps nowadays are usually full of utter ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Running From and To your Troubles
Hello Ashy! I'm Arc, here to review your story. What I liked about this was mainly the idea behind it. The whole drug-dealer situation. I like how it's first person ...
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Re: Sick Day
Hiya magpie, here to review your poem today! The subject and message of this is really quite clever. I like the fact that I haven't really heard it before, and ...
Jun 30, 2013
